aw man :(

Reply: Atsukimo

I made this story a long time ago, and I dont know if I'll ever finish it :/ I haven't really watched this movie one last time, but I got too obsessed with anime. And my stories have improved alot :\

It's...Decent, alot of it doesn't make too much sense, though. CL's father leaving because he was 5 minutes late made NO sense at all, why didn't Abby, and CL try to I don't know...comfort Fish? LETS FIND KILLER LAWL! ALot of the plot should have been looked over, redone, refined, etc.

Very great story! *adds to favs*

woah, Angel is the killer? That's cool!

hope you like this story so far.

It's pretty good. I can't wait to see the next chapter.

It is getting better and better chapter after chapter

Yeah, your chapters are pretty short. But you make good sized paragraphs to make up for it. I really like this so far. Poor fish! Poor Abby! It's so sad! But it has me trying to figure out who the killer is. Update when you can.

You know, that CL's dad left him behind just like that is unrealistic. And that he's not angry either when Abby suggest him his dad may be the killer isn't realistic either.

Everybody commits mistakes in their first stories. Don't worry. And yes, chapters are kinda short. Try to make 'em longer.

Good luck!

Not bad... Go on. Good luck. We all need it.

Still can't wait to see what happens.. Fish is the Best

This story was so exciting I can't wait to see what happens... I love Fish out of Water! He is the Best!