Yattaa~! ^_^ I know this kind of response for a fic this filled with angst would probably depress someone (it would for me) but I can't help it! It's so . . . dramatic. I love your writing style. It makes me want to just sink into the overflowing waterfall of imagery.

Unfortunately, I can't pick out the undertones and metaphors, and now you're driving me crazy looking for them. O_o

And I don't, as of yet, have a fic challenge. I will find one, though. Trust me.

This was really good. I love the emotion and imagery. Very nicely written.

I agree, faves don't give you feedback. Very nice, well-written, deep, introspective . . . (nods head approvingly) I especially love that second-to-last line: 'But what is one more sin to the sinner?'
Well done. Glad that you decided to write this.
-Lina