Cool Story

I'm gonna take a wild guess and say it's Izumi. Fingers crossed that I'm right, on to the next chapter!! :D By the way, you're doing a great job on the story! ^_^

Um, yeah...It looked interesting at first...but this character is WAY too Mary-Sue. She gets along with them too well in the first 5 minutes...

Yeah...most people don't like Mary-Sues...sorry >.

wickd so far

sup where your peeps gone to? hey im hanging my screen name and adopting a new one yay me whoo *does happy dance* yay me *does mix of happy and victory dance*

oh what will you eat for dinner?? so sorry i just had to ask that question you said it im asking it

I really like it! You should update quickly!

YAY! Updateness! ^^ Glad you updated again, and I hope to see another sometime soon!^^

Bye bye, Barry. *waves*

Yay! Barry! He's one of the best anime villians, in my opinion. The perfect mix of ruthlessness and insanity! *starts laughing psychotically* My idol!

This is sunch a cool story! Can't wait until the next chapter!

hey it took u 4ever 2 update! anyway, it was, as always, great!
continue soon!

You’re all exactly the same… stop with the Mary Sues!

There's quite an interesting plot you have here (:

hi! i loved these chapters! they were cool! i wonder if win likes ed... and if envy likes skye (obviously!!)
continue soon!!