aww, so sad.

I hope his bankai goes along the line of kill em all!

OMFG...that was so angsty...if Yachiru were to die in the manga, I would have to kill someone...that should not happen to Zaraki and I hope it doesn't happen...

But, seeing as what the future battles could hold in the manga...it's possible to see that happen...I hope not...but maybe something similar to this, like Yachiru getting seriously injured...that would cause Zaraki to break and lose control of his feelings...he cares too much for her to see her get seriously hurt...if she died, I don't think he could go on living...

no! no! chiru-chan can't die. no! very good capturing of emotion though.

That was so sad I hope Yachiru doesn't die in the manga or anime Ken-chan would be so sad. Loved this one shot though made me nearly cry! ;(

ah.. such angst. very sad one-shot. beautiful description.. keep up da good work.

... T_T

That was SAD.

And believable.

Go you.

*weeps some more*

God, you made me die. But that's a good thing. Great writing with wonderful description... Ah the angst. Lovely fic. ^__^

A great one-shot! Write more on Zaraki Yachiru :D