   Hannio 6/18/03 . chapter 12Cool get the next chapter up please, I wanna know what's gonna happen. Pretty please |
| yamatoforever 11/19/02 . chapter 12 Argh, how could you ended it like that? Now I would never sleep tight until I could read the next chapter of this story. I bet Hiroshi would be really mad to know that Khoushiro went out with him because he was look like Jyou. And with the gun in his hand, he would be very dangerous. Hey, maybe Sora would save the day for them. I mean, there must be a reason why you made her appear in this chapter right? Please post the next chapter quickly! |
| Alene Deirbre 10/27/02 . chapter 11 wow, It started out so simple, and has somehow become very... eerie, this is of course a good thing, I truly hope you continue this soon. |
| yamatoforever 10/7/02 . chapter 11 Finally, you update it! I've been waiting for this new chapter for so long! Did Khoushiro really call Hiroshi? I mean, after he knew how cruel Hiroshi to Jyou? And what would Taichi and Takeru do in order to protect the one they love? Uhm, just one thing, human's blood is blue? Are you sure? I really don't know anything about that. Please post the next chapter quickly! |
| yamatoforever 7/26/02 . chapter 10 Well, it's the same chapter alright with the last one. Only added more detail to make me hate Hiroshi more. Please post the real next chapter next time, okay? _ |
| Ice Demon 7/23/02 . chapter 10 AHHHHHHHHH! this story is well written, and a very interesting plot line...can't wait till the next chapter comes out. by da way...chapter 9 was uploaded twice...:) |
| insert witty 7/22/02 . chapter 9 Poor Jyou...;_; Please continue! I'm really curious about the Taichi/Yama thing too |
| Taichi Princess 6/30/02 . chapter 9 *Gapes* Oh the insanity! |
| Cu Sith 6/30/02 . chapter 9 *Cries* Poor Jyou-san! |
| Angel Ran 6/12/02 . chapter 8 GAAAH! Pleeeease make the pairing Taito! ;_; It just...has to be! And, from the sound of it Jyoushiro would be good too! _ Taiora...i don't think so...*trailing off* Maybe if it ends quickly... But, I'm in love with your story! _ |
| Hikari Ishikawa 5/31/02 . chapter 8 ! You just Gotta continue this! It's such a brilliant story! |
| patadragon 5/28/02 . chapter 8 PLEASE keep writing! This is so good and such a cliffhanger. You HAVE to update it. please. |
| Fellace 5/16/02 . chapter 8 pleeeeeeeease finish? poor yamato. maybe tai can stand by his side... but i still want yama-angst. ;-; i'm weird like that. well, please get the next chapter out quickly! |
| yamatoforever 5/15/02 . chapter 8 Oh, Masaharu gonna hurt Matt real bad. And what would Tai do? Keep waiting outside or burst in? Hmm, no wonder Matt became so bitter now considering what his father did to him all this time. Please post the next chapter quickly! |
| insert witty 5/12/02 . chapter 8 *gasp* AAAAAAH! YOU STOPPED RIGHT THERE? IIIIIIIIH! PLEASE WRITE MORE! WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN TO YAMA? |
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