I think I would be disturbed by this if it weren't for your amazing writing that caught all of my attention.

You have a great talent for description and writing it without laying it down delicately. You served it in its raw and I enjoyed it immensely; I found it to be much more interesting than sick

Hmm... I'm torn over this fic. I agree that things must have happened to Seishirou in his childhood to make him a sociopath... but to go so hardcore with those "things", I feel like you're being an apologist for his actions, and also using hardcore stuff purely for shock value. I dunno... its like, to write something like that seems wrong to me, the same way it would be wrong for a non-jew to write a fictional memoir of the holocaust. I dunno what I'm trying to say. I'm not even trying to be critical.. it just stems from something rather personal. You're a good writer though _

First off... Your writing is flat out perfect. I have no commentary on that except that is flawless. I can't think of any other word to place on it.

This story makes me feel very, very bad for seishirou. ; ; He had a piggie. ; ; And they made him kill it! How can you kill a piggie! : - ; I can picture a little seishirou with a piggie...

Anyway, I really love this story and its concept. I'm going to keep a close eye on this and your other work from now on. It surely deserves it.

Geez, that's scarey stuff 0_0;; But, I like it anyway. It's a good take on how Seishirou became the way he is.

You are a disturbed individual. And you're right, this really is a story all on it's own. It's really amazing.

That last line killed me.