   DavisJes 8/11/08 . chapter 1Nicely done. Only thing that made it hard to read was there were no spaces between the lines. |
| Archangel Rhapsody 5/15/04 . chapter 1 powerful. |
| Rose Eclipse 10/16/02 . chapter 1 Chills and thrills-oh, you describe his thoughts very well! |
| StarChild2 6/4/02 . chapter 1 *Sob* This is so beautiful. I love it! You should write a story based on this |
| Spirit of Cosmos 8/23/01 . chapter 1 AHHHHHH! YET ANOTHER AMAZING FIC! |
| Aaron Nowack 5/1/01 . chapter 1 An interesting character study on Demando. Nice. |
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