Glad I helped brighten someones day back then X'D This chapter seemed more like an epilogue bleh :P Oh wells lots of great things end disappointingly I can gather you were in a rush and that's usually what botches it. I hope to read more from you anyway ^__^

~N.Mits
/\_/\
>^,^< ..~Nyo
-/ \ …WARNING: Don’t be fooled by the innocent guise.
(__)__, ...This cat’s secretly plotting your demise.

That was so sad and cute! Raz and Lienna are married! I can't wait til you update!

i loved this chapter! glad u got bk to writing it !

That was so cool! I can't wait til you update!

-Dials phone #-
-Answering machine plays-
N.Mits (-.-;): Hello Tifa, when you get this message can you tell well tell the whole gang that Sephiroth is out of his mind (not like thats anything new) and is trying to destroy the world with meteor we need your help!
Automated voice: to send your message press one, to listen to your message press two, to re-record your message press three, to delete your message press pound.
(-.-;) N.Mits: Oops I accidently hit pound! oh No-o-o-o (runs around frantically)

-N.Mits the cat child of light (liked the chapter altough wishes when Yukita was watching her brother die she was laughing maniacally instead of glaring N.Mits also has a new sig addition)
/\_/\
>^,^< ..~Nyo
-/ \ …WARNING: Don’t be fooled by the innocent guise.
(__)__, ...This cat’s secretly plotting your demise.

AW that was so cute! I can't wait til update!

hey angel! awesome chapter im glad u kept writin this
the portals...i blame on thee hyldens magic haha!

*uses Knights of the round on Sephiroth then yells* You shall not destroy everything.
nice chapter ^.^

-N.Mits

that was so cool I really can't wait 'til you update!

awesome you kidnapped the almighty Sephiroth for your opening A/N however did you accomplish this task XD lol

hahahahahah that Mick dude he'd slay me (by sides spliting in mirth) if he hadn't died in this chapter -.-; aw well it still was funny XD

-N.Mits

that was neat I cant wait til you update!

There's something not-quite-compelling going on here. I shouldn't really comment at all since I can't quite put my finger on it, but I'm going to try to narrow it down.

The first part, from Raziel looking at the clothing to Lienna zipping up his trousers for him, that was good. A bit of really odd comma usage, but it created an interesting image. I think you might have been 'in the moment,' I think I was.

The other parts weren't so engaging. The images seemed mouse-drawn, if you understand the metaphor.

I think you've improved, but I think you are capable of more.

that was cool! can you update soon?

yay!
love it
XD