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| PikaYoshiGirl 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseHey, I remember seeing this as one of my first fanfics that I ever read. I came to fanfiction, looking for something SSBM related. That was at least 5 years ago! I was very young then, so I was terrified of reading stories with swear words in it, and I was relieved that this was one of the few stories that I could read at the time. I can't believe its still here-It also has a lot more reviews now. This insired me for some funny ideas for future fanfics that I had always wanted to write. Thanks! |
| Phoenixignition 2007-10-03 ch 7, anon. | abuseI question the point of fluffy stories! Oh well, there isn't really a point to them. What I find funny, is the completly boring things that two (so called) cute thingies can do. It's amazing how boring stuff can turn out to be funny, mostly when you're dying of bordom. |
| LeneeTheSunsetAngel 2007-06-21 ch 7, | abuseVERY FUNNY! ^^ I needed a good laugh. You're a pretty good writer. And who'da thunk (I speak redneck...heh heh...I blame my parents) Kirby would've eaten a deck of Uno cards. And anyone else wonder just how Kirby can fit all of that crap in his stomach and STILL not change his cute little pudge-ball shape? I'd LOVE to know. ^_* |
| Fairy Red 2007-05-16 ch 7, | abuseWho could complain?! This is wonderful! Will you review soon? I hope so...a cardboard box...wow. See you again! |
| Fairy Red 2007-05-16 ch 6, | abusewho's yo mamma? ...never mind. Play uno inside kirby's stomach! THAT SO CUTE! |
| Fairy Red 2007-05-16 ch 5, | abuseOh...Will Mario be all right? And Lee came back... glee. Short chapter, but I still loved it! |
| Fairy Red 2007-05-16 ch 4, | abuseOh, no, poor Pikachu and Kirby! HERE! -gives them a flashlight and blankie- There! All better now! ^^ I'll continue! |
| Fairy Red 2007-05-16 ch 3, | abuseHahah...aliens. CUTE! I LOVE THIS STORY! I'll keep reading! |
| lemuel ouano 2007-01-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseDon't leave this story like a mountain always staying where it is. |
| Kaikouji 2006-11-17 ch 7, | abuseTHAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVER! PLEASE one more chapter PLEASE! |
| RoyZeldaLinkMarth 2006-10-20 ch 7, | abuseWhat a shame this is all of the story that you have so far. I do hope that you will update this story in the near future, as I am quite a fan of this story. Well done, Tyler |
| RoyZeldaLinkMarth 2006-10-20 ch 6, | abuseYay, hurrah for Uno. Again, another cute and funny chapter. Not the best crafted, but perhaps one of the funnier chapters. Good job. Tyler |
| RoyZeldaLinkMarth 2006-10-20 ch 5, | abuseHaha, I laughed at the breakfast scene, it was quite funny. This is going along very smoothly, and I shall continue to read. Well done, I quite liked this chapter, perhaps not the best, but one of the best so far. Good job, Tyler |
| RoyZeldaLinkMarth 2006-10-20 ch 4, | abuseI\'m not sure how Zelda and Ganondorf are related, but again, another funny chapter. This story is very well crafted and written. I would have to say this genius idea could not have just been made up on the spot, instead requiring some sort of thought put into it. Well done, Tyler |
| RoyZeldaLinkMarth 2006-10-20 ch 3, | abuseThis is getting better as it goes. Well done, you\'ve made Kirby and Pikachu into likeable characters, good job. Tyler |