Hey I'm not much into Zach/Max but I really enjoyed this piece and the story that came before it.

hey! i love your story!!
I first read this at Zack's world and loved it...
i love the part with the sparing in the warehouse.
and how you made Zack so non-judgmental and all
And so i liked it so much.. i just keep coming back to read it again!
And i like how this didn't start M/Z but kind of evolved into it... sorta like it would be if it ever happened on the show..
keep writing magical stuff... out

Loved the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! damn can u write a story. write more please!

i luv it!!!! pleeze rite more, another story, but no logan at all

I loved that Zack ended up together with Max (Yay! Not enough M/Z stories out there.), but why does Max have to feel so . . . conflicted - loving Logan too and not sure if her relationship will last? C'mon, it's a fanfic - happy, sappy endings are the norm, right? (grin)


In any case, very well written story, you did an excellent job. And the side story with Jondy and Cindy - incredible - so many people neglect stuff like that. Write more! :)


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Very nice work. While some of the scenes were a little brief, especially the final Jondy/OC scene, you did a great job of handling the Z/M/L triangle, and you gave Max that whole "strong woman" edge that they just can't manage on the show by letting her choose Zack. I really like what you've written, I hope to see more in the future. (And by the by, I really enjoy "The Lost Son," I can't wait to see it finished)

I think that Zack and Max belong together. anywho, it was a really good story you had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see who she would chose. Ja

I liked the A and B stories here. A story, Max and her unexpected homecoming and B: OC and Jondy's relationship. Not may people have approached the Original Cindy female/female relationship. And you did it with an X5, another original move. Plus created a triangle between Logan/Max/Zack who's resolution truly keeps you wondering till the last momment. Cool story, good work.

OMG, you REALLY should've put in the summary this was going to be a M/Z fic to warn other M/L shippers, cuz I almost had a heart attack there!!! I mean, in the beginning you had her missing Seattle and all that, but then there was this huge twist in the plot! But aside from that, wonderful story!

more,more,more I can't wait to see what happens next. Is this an M/Z or an M/L either way I can deal now. Still like Logan, but I have a fondness for Zach's character now.

hey that was great, please write more soon!!!! I hope logan gets over it and they hook up, but i know they will, they always do!!!!!!

so sad! keep it up and post more soon!

poorly

cool

Oh please continue!!!