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| Elica 2006-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was awe some! I loved it to bits. The way you wrote in first person was fantastic! I could totally picture everything that you described, especially when Amy spoke about her previous postings and how she felt about the job! It really gave me an insight to the character. And the Alex/Amy moments were so gorgeous! My favourite bits were: Amy talking to that girl at Kings Cross, and relating to her. Amy taking Alex's hand when Ella was leading them to the hut "Get your arses to 346 Ketches Gorge Road right now..." Haha. That is classic. Alex kissing Amy on the cheek after having thai :wub: :wub: I had to read that bit like 7 times! :D Evan holding Amy in a friend to friend way at the hospital - very sweet! :) I'm off to read the next part :D Thank you!! |
| The Evil Sheep 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abusepretty bloody good! i wish it was longer. mabey you could divide up the story into chapters though cuz i don't have time to read it all at once then i would know where i was up to. i never thought i would like a fic with amy in it. but this 1 was really col. can you do another sequil please please please please please! :) |
| Simo 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abusehey Brindy you know how much i adore you and ur fanfics, esp the fact u love Tessy as much as Jakc and myself. I liked this fic very much, it was alot and had me going for a long time, just a few pointers: ~ there are many spelling mistakes etc, i know i can't talk but still! ~ at the beginning i felt that the fic was a bit slow, this may have been coz something was happening in ur life etc, but never let ur life afect ur writing in a bad way, only in a good way. ~about the sharing an "almost kiss" with Pj, as far as i know she kissed him! i am soo sick of people saying that she didn't coz it was clear that they did, they thing is u could use this! think about it, ur smart. overall i loved this one plus all ur other fanfics, you have something else other fanfic writers don't. this is the same thing Jakc has. Love ya Brindy Curlysimmons |
| MysticalSock 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI know I’ve told you this before on the .org forum, but well done, you deserve a gold star, that was amazing! ~Nat~ |
| Brindabella 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseAw Jakc you're gorgeous! Thankyou so much for that review, it's possibly the best and most in depth and lengthy review I've ever recieved for any of my fics, and you know how much I adore reviews! And oh yes, by you saying that you love the way I write...it sure does mean something! It's very inspiring, and I'm so glad you enjoy reading what I write. And I know exactly what you mean about the words creating pictures in your head...it's how I write the story! I see the picture in my head and then go about describing it into a fanfic. Like, if this makes sense, it needs to play out in my head first, I need to see the scene and picture it happening and then I write about it. I agree, the more detail the more real it seems and the better you can see the scene in front of you. I got that from John marsden's The Tomorrow Series, as his descriptions in there are absolutely second to none and so I try to describe things as well as he does. I'm glad you also liked the portrayal of Amy...it was so interesting to write. I just tried to put myself into her shoes, try to think how she would think (going by what I had observed of her on the show of course). The best parts were when she was trying to be 'just Amy' and the parts where she lost it and cried. Aww I reread the T&J one the other day too! there was actually a little secret connection to that fic and this one, which no one probably picked up on (although maybe you did, since you've read it 5 times, lol). Early in this fic I wrote about how Amy knew how Susie and Jonesy felt when they rescued 'the mother and daughter from her car wreck on Christmas Eve' and how Amy wished she could save every road victim, and the next one and the next one. This was in reference to the car crash that Susie and Jonesy attended oin the T&J fic, where Jonesy pulled the little baby out of the car. Anyways...just a little titbit of info there, probably useless, but I slipped it in anyways :P Thanks again for the review, and that sucks that you couldn't review the T&J one again - like you can't get enough of my fics, I can't get enough of your reviews and would've loved to see another one for the T&J fic! But I think they have changed the format here a bit so that might be why. I love that you liked the Christmas tree bit, I am such a Christmas nut and that's why I went into such depth about that, lol, it's one of my fave bits too. I just realised that it was about exactly one year ago today that I wrote that fic, just in time for Christmas! Have a good one! And thanks for reviewing! I'll get onto my other fics asap! I'm in a fic mood now! |
| jakc 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuse:) *cheers* YAY! Finally got to see your name on the top of the page again! I was terribly excitied!! Oh Brindy what can I say? It's marvellous! This mightn't mean anything much but I love the way you write, it's incredible. I don't usually mention it because people give me weird looks but I make pictures in my head when I read (I suppose everyone else does too), the more descriptive the piece the more I lose myself in the images and Brindy you really put me there, in the middle of it all and the pictures that I get when I'm reading are so vivid it's like watching a high definition movie! Everything's so real, that stark darkness when Alex got shot, the pain running through him (that actually made me feel a bit sick- usual reaction I get to pain!), the smell of the thai food and it's exotic taste, the vague glitter of light through Amy's hair. I just love everything about this fic...then again I love all your fics, it's that weird way they make me see things. Amazing portrayal of Amy, it's so fantastically 'real', I could just put myself into her shoes, which is something I can't usually do! Top stuff! It's was absolutely awesome! *sighs* :) I read your Christmas TJ fic the other day (for the fifth time! hehe I must admit, it the Christmas tree that gets me, amazingly good Xmas tree! I just read that bit over and over to see the Xmas tree- I've a bit of a sucker for bright lights and baubles!) and it wouldn't let me post another review *sighs* so just wanted to tell you it got me in the Xmas mood and that I loved it (again really, loved it all the times I read it to be honest!) Oh you gotta write some more! I'm in dire need of good reading material! |