Well, it's an interesting start. I don't really like that she had a kid with this guy who's "half-vampire"? What in the world? That's kind of stupid. Buffy is supposed to end up with Angel or Spike or somebody. Anyway, it is pretty good, and you should continue, though I do not really like the fact that a random character named Cole was inserted.

oh please continue this story i really like it! in fact i love it! plz update it!

update UPDATE.

Neat. Hope there's more soon.

love the back story,but can you fry the scoobies already please

i like it! continue soon! :)

awesome story so far. Can't wait to see where you go with this.

ok loving it but please update more also don't make Buffy out to be a traitor or anything must have more

more please,just tell me now did buffy get the scythe and give it to angel to give to them and why hasn't Dawn told them what she said to Buffy to make her slap Chapters please