Oh man, this series rocks! Gotta continue it! :)

Mike.

great , i enjoyed it much

so funny! update soon!

It's amazing how the song lyrics can completely contradict the situation.

You would take any chance to get at Jesse McCartney, wouldn't you?

Yes! The series lives on!

roflmao

wow... sequels really ARE better than the original LOL

YAY SEQUEL! you're so funny...

you know, i don't read or support ronbon, but that was my favorite little skit this chapter. tres funny, and in a weird way, cute.

I actually like Jesse McCartney's song Beautiful Soul, but when I saw him star on PUNK'd, didn't like him much as a person. Anyway very good and funny! I love the song She Likes Me For Me, it's one of my favs! Anyway great job!

kpandron

First Scene: Good line, man. "Operable with Stoppable".

Second Scenes: Okay, I THINK I get it... not sure if all that was really necessary, though.

Ron & OBoyz: Ack! Gag! Plpth!

Ron & Bonnie: Oh, no you don't, I've been down this road with your before, and you'll just pull the rug out from under me, and then end the story. I should quit reading RIGHT NOW!

Part 3: Ron vs Jessee: Okay, THAT was unexpected... did I just see some Ron/Jesse hinting? No? Rats.

assistANT Manager.

So. I'm left with an empty feeling. All this doesn't GO anywhere? I mean, I'm glad you got your "hurricane" off your back, but geez, man, have some respect for us readers! Turn your hurricane into a STORY, or at LEAST connect your vignettes together, SOMEhow. You're an AUTHOR, man... take some responsibility!

Number 3: One of the greatest things that I have ever had the pleasure of seeing in my mind's eye.

Number 4: Let's hear it for the Ned-love.

Number 5: Well, a ninja has to do what a ninja has to do.

Hah... Take that, and that! How are you gonna 'Get Your Shine On' now, eh? Take that! You stupid son of a.

im with you on this one

What did Yori ever do to earn such punishment?

Cute story.