Very good! You really have a talent for getting into the minds of characters! Nice play on the dual personality aspect.

"Lights was when we were happy, without Precious, without you." So very, very sad - reminds me of why I felt so bad for Smeagol in "The Two Towers." Still, I have to wonder what made Smeagol want the ring so badly (enough to kill) from the very instant he saw it.

"You'll never be rid of me Smeagol. Just like you'll never be rid of the Precious. You need us." It'd be more in character if it had some extra "s's" thrown in there - "You needs us." But it sounds more ominous this way, so if that's what you were going for, it works!

very sad. poor smeagol. T_T good story.

Wow.

I nearly cried.

This is a really interesting look into Smeagol's ?personaliy/pysche? whatever. I liked it.

Very interesting piece, I liked it. Smeagol always rather interested me...and at times I kind of felt sorry for him (But not Gollum, he was just a creep, plain and simple). But I liked this little look/argument into their psyche, well done