this is great!:)

(O_O)

Wow. I loved it.

Great job.

the truly sad thing about this is that it could happen.

"Silence allowed them to hang on the edge of sanity." wow. amazing piece :D i loved it

That is kind of sad. It's very well written, great job.

The theme is really touching, and well developed. Loved it.
Regards!

i read ur sequel! these two storys were good and angsty. love it! it satisfied my angstyness need! ur awsome!

Interesting although a little short. I LOVE the idea that the team ends up together - I like your idea of silence (the exact opposite of their genin team) ruling their world. On the whole, I would just like to see a little more. I know I'm demanding. Well done!

I've always thought that words were the thing that tipped the scales from hate to love. Very nice.

Wow...sadistic. I like the stance you take on they would act after they get Sasuke back from Orochimaru. Most people tend to give them happy endings but it wouldn't be as easy to accept Sasuke with open arms after the betrayal. Its nice to see someone take this situation and put it in a realistic manner. I love it!

Sarah: WHAT?!?! that was just... scary...

Ouch... Physical impact with that one. Phenomenal, though I would think that such stasis couldn't remain. At some point, something would have to give.

Good. Merry Christmas!

Beautiful.
Absolutely exquisite.
Loved the portrayal of feelings and personalities especially without the names.
I'm jealous now... Xl
~Shizzy

That was utterly amazing. And so brilliantly sad. A definite favourite.