It's really cute and good! You definately should continue writing. ^_^

this story really sad but really good! Great job!

I really liked it, I felt like crying because it was so sad. Like Someday Eternity said it was very sweet. I love your style of writing except for when you cut to someone speaking. I sometimes can't tell who is supposed to be speaking. But I loved it none the less.(And I am the same person with the name below, I just felt like putting the signature from now on.)

~Nobody With A Heart~

I really liked this, and I would read other oneshots about this universe if you wrote some more.

So sweet! Aww... But so sad that Riku was blind... I liked it. It was good!