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| jordan 2007-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abusehey this story is great so if you could finish it soon that would be great |
| charcol 2006-11-22 ch 1,  | abuseI read the prologue and liked it, but I can't seem to find the rest of it >.< Please write some more, I promise to review if you do ^.^ It sounds like it's going to be interesting but then the rest isn't there. My apologies for not having any constructive criticism but one thing I noticed, does Ed use an honorific when referring to his mother? That would then be 'okaasan'. Anyway, it's an interesting idea and it would be nice to see more. =^-^= |
| Hermy1991 2006-08-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat is a really cool start. You should write it... |
| devilangel92 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWow i like it. Update soon please. |
| Hunter Hatake and Neko Uchi... 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abusethis great story pleaz write more soon |
| KimberlyRian 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseKewl. This is really good! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon (and don't take that the wrong way, some authors/authoresses do...)! |
| Maple Isabell 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abuseACK!! Where is the rest?!?! |
| Noreen 2005-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood fic. By the way, did you know that finalfantasys-child has a similar fic? I think you should read that to make sure your fic doesn't become too similar. |
| Rory 2005-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhen are you going to update? Will Ed have his daddy’s powers? You just have to update? |
| Edward Mustang 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseThe only real thing that attracted me to this story is the title. My name -cheez- But I liked reading this. |
| Little Miss Alison Elric 2005-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent. Excellent. Keep going. And to the person who said "Isn't 9 yrs old...burden...shoulders?" Wasn't Al 9 when he lost his body in the series? |
| K 2005-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood story. |
| Flye 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI think 9 years old is a little too young to have a heavy burden placed on his shoulders. Besides that it's a great start! :] |