Hey. That was a pretty good, lemon, But it was hard to read coz it was a little clamped 2gether.

Perhaps as an idea, space it out more.

Rxx

... *grins* Kenshin OOC is so funny, u should write it, it would be really good. altho, if u are going to write the KK fic, then make sure Kenshin says 'Oro' at least one time plezz! it's just so funny when he says it

Loved it! so cute, definitly go on ahead and write a K/K i'll be looking forward to it.

No entiendo nada!TT_TT,jo con lo bonito q tiene q estar.Espero q sepas ablar español,porque yo de inglés se muy poco.Me gustaría que lo pasaras al español(si puedes)o si no,pide ayuda a algún español que sepa ingles,porque yo sé muy poquito.Bueno creo que este fic vale la pena,aunque no entienda el 99% de este fic pero bueno.Besos.Hablaré en ingles.Kisses for you,and this fic is very beautifuld.Es lo único que ser decir.Espero que sepas traducir.Good Bye.

that was really good! i can tell that you put a lot of emotion and feeling into this one. i love the whole cave idea and the story behind the cave too. ) good job!

NC-17, not R.

I loved the story! Aoshi and Misao are one of my favorite couples! Great story! 10/10

Dude, that was the best lemon fic I've ever read. I love the overall feeling of the fic, the mystic aura of the cave, and the wonderful descriptions. I think I'm on a lemon frenzy or something, this is like the 4th lemon today...

It was so romantic,try writing one for himura and koaru also for sano and megumi.

it was THE BEST your good well make chp. two now um ya god so yya um ya good good ya good
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Kawaii! How very sweet! You know, its real hard to find a lemony fic with a good plot. Most of the time its smut for the sake of smut, but i don't complain. .; Its such a sweet story! Write the K&K one, onegai!

YaaY! Misao and Aoshi r soo kawaii!

Very sweet. I really liked it!

I like your story, I really did...

how romantic! there was lots of feeling and love...please write more!