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Reviews for: Sanctuary 100
Misura
2006-02-02 . chapter 3
And as simple as that, Kira fixes something. I liked the way this ficlet showed the power of love without getting sappy or sickly-sweet, and with showing a bit of Katou's situation at home. Considering Kira's relationship with his own 'family' adds an extra layer to this piece of writing that made it even more enjoyable. ^-^
Misura
2006-01-12 . chapter 2
Loved the way a simple, fun event, like a friend asking another friend over for Christmas, became all symbolic and ominous when placed in this fandom, and written in a drabble by you. ^-^
Misura
2006-01-12 . chapter 1
And I'm sure that her mother actually had good intentions, rather than just having the music-box disappear because she was going crazy having to listen to its melody all the time. ^^; A softly subtle drabble about the family relationships between mother, daughter and son. (Or maybe I should say: brother, sister and parent.)
Vi_olet
2006-01-02 . chapter 3
You could definatly take this somewhere. but my biggest suggestion is that you make them longer; more detailed and create more of a story rather than 4 or 5 sentences. Keep it up I hope to see some longer one next
~Vi~
Aseret Kitsune
2005-12-21 . chapter 3
Another sweet one.^^
Aseret Kitsune
2005-12-21 . chapter 2
This is really sweet.^^
Aseret Kitsune
2005-12-21 . chapter 1
Wow, how sad. Poor Sara. Great one.
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