 Misura 2006-02-02 . chapter 3And as simple as that, Kira fixes something. I liked the way this ficlet showed the power of love without getting sappy or sickly-sweet, and with showing a bit of Katou's situation at home. Considering Kira's relationship with his own 'family' adds an extra layer to this piece of writing that made it even more enjoyable. ^-^ |
 Misura 2006-01-12 . chapter 2Loved the way a simple, fun event, like a friend asking another friend over for Christmas, became all symbolic and ominous when placed in this fandom, and written in a drabble by you. ^-^ |
 Misura 2006-01-12 . chapter 1And I'm sure that her mother actually had good intentions, rather than just having the music-box disappear because she was going crazy having to listen to its melody all the time. ^^; A softly subtle drabble about the family relationships between mother, daughter and son. (Or maybe I should say: brother, sister and parent.) |
 Vi_olet 2006-01-02 . chapter 3 You could definatly take this somewhere. but my biggest suggestion is that you make them longer; more detailed and create more of a story rather than 4 or 5 sentences. Keep it up I hope to see some longer one next
~Vi~ |
 Aseret Kitsune 2005-12-21 . chapter 3Another sweet one.^^ |
 Aseret Kitsune 2005-12-21 . chapter 2This is really sweet.^^ |
 Aseret Kitsune 2005-12-21 . chapter 1Wow, how sad. Poor Sara. Great one. |