I loved it, i love this story. Please write more! I love it!!














a jillion stars

that was so sad and kawaii i almost cried

Are you ever going to continue this one??

tehe i like it a lot! its cute, but also angsty :D keep it up please, your writing is currently allowing me to not freak over my exams tomorrow! seecha

*sighs happily*
This is so sweet...
I luv how you sneak in little
Bits of romance ;)
Can't wait to see when Kai finally acknoledges
That he loves Tyson~~!!
BTW I luv how you write Kai,
You know like givin' him emotions and all
It's a nice change^^
Please update soon~!!
^^

OMG i am absolutly in love with this fic! It is by far my all time fave fic ever! please, please, please update it soon :) ~SF~

You have got to update soon for me I really liked these stories and the cliffe laft me craving for more. God Job.

aww a ckiffy but i like it...very cute of the idea of him being an angel!

Oh i total loved that chapter it was very fluff some and a ever cryed cause it got so moving

Bad bad cliffies. If I was Hiro, I would have fainted... Hehe... a littl fluff between Kai and Tyson. Do update soon!

oh, wow. not even half way done yet, you say. this shall be most interesting indeed. i really like this story. it has a lot of detail, and i think the way you make the pairing out to be is really sweet. well, tiem to go. looking forward to your next update. laters, bottlecaps

*Splutters* This story is too cute. It should printed off and be given a front cover and lots of pictures, stuck in a book and given to me as a birthday present (exactly a month til my 21st muahahaha!) But yeah, on a more serious note, Kai is just so adorable in this chapter, I don't know who is more of a guardian angel to who! He looks after Tyson so well ;__;

I absolutely LOVED the bits with Hiro, first him seeing Kai and then the note and then getting to see Tyson, they were all so lovely. I feel sorry for Hiro though, he's the only one in that family who is still alive *pout*. Poor laddie.

I also really liked the bit with the elder looking into the bowl thing and seeing Tyson, and that you'd written his thoughts in as well like him being worried about Tyson and how he knew about the attraction.. That bit was extremely well written. Oh yes. It was.

There were only four mistakes I picked up as I read through :

Third paragraph after the first page rule (within the story - 2nd overall). "The bluenet blinked and give his charge a grateful look" - 'gave' rather than 'give', perhaps?

Tenth paragraph in the same section "“Say high to Mum, and Gramps, and Tyson for me, ok?” - Should be 'hi' not 'high'.

Ninth paragraph in the next section (after the 2nd page rule within the story) "Of course. They are the..." - You missed the speech marks at the start of Tyson's sentence.

First sentence of the next section "Up in Ai Clouds, the elder in change of the guardian angels" - 'charge' not 'change'?

Other than that I do believe this was purfick Lol. Absolutely adore this story. A lot. I AM going to draw that scene but it will take a while - especially the colouring. I'd rather finish off my other projects first.

... I want to play with Tyson's wings too *pout*. He must look so lovely ^^ Anywho, until next time, TC. Peace.

~Angel~

um How was Kai not noticed in the room? Oh well now he is! Hiro take care of Dragoon! Get a Wife have a few kids be happy! I feel bad for Hiro that's gotta be creepy. eh That's boring sounding place that the Elder's at. Cool I like the Elder! oh Attraction hmm it will become mutaul...I hope

Really sweet chapter, I loved it ! ^-^ A bit angsty, but it ends good, so it's ok ! ^^ Great job !

Update again soon, I can't wait ! ^_~

aww that was pretty good it be sad for kai when Tyson had to go back to the Ai clouds update it soon