Wow. You really liked to get into pokemon's heads back in the day.

Ahh, humble beginnings!

HAHAHAHA.ironic

2/1/12 . chapter 1

Giving constructive criticism with flame...

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Go get a beta reader or something. THIS IS AN ABSOLUTE MESS.

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Oh, so you can rambles PreciousAll's story and it's grammar, huh? Huh?

Or maybe you don't remember because you're rambling and flaming too much instead of giving constructive criticism? HUH? Here's another example

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This is an incoherent mess

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Wow...saying someone's work like that? Oh...YOU'RE TOO MUCH!

If you want to criticize, don't use sharp words like that! You're hurting too many people! Just look at those forums that argue to you! Do you think you're good and so mighty so you can give a concrit with flame? WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT SHIT?

@Dark Waffles

...Are you serious? "Grammer" isn't even a word. It's GRAMMAR. And as far as I know, this poem is completely, grammatically correct!

Anyway, I loved the poem. I always thought the idea of Pokemon was brutal(though I love it), and it was neat seeing it through an actual Pokemon's eyes. Well done :)

I agree with Shh this is terrible look up basic grammer before you post! lol

DUDE! YOU NEED TO SPACE THINGS OUT! THIS SUCKS!

Good job on this though I can't help but think... didn't Pikachu go against him as well -if we are talking about the show-, not just Charzard? I might be wrong and I could have sworn he also saved Pikachu -or at least tried to- from getting too hurt as well... of course once again I could be wrong /.

Nicely done.

you should write that story

Awesome, as usual. This really got me thinking about a pokemon's train of thought, and brought up a lot of good questions. Gold Star!

Ever since getting interested in pokemon again, I have found the whole capturing and battling aspect highly disturbing. I mean, they fight until they pass out and its very brutal. I thought this was a good portrayal of how Pikachu would think. However, if we acknowledge that what the main characters do is wrong then there's no longer much point in pokemon battles.

cool! :D some people just come up with better ideas then others, isnt that right?

Nice. I never thought about it that way. Good Job

hey, i think this is coll but u need 2 do better i hope u cn do better thn ths, ja XP

It's good.

i like this little poem/ story. it has cuteness! Rock on!