I like the sequel. I never thought of Bonnie and Monique. I still love how Kim and Shego show affection by fighting.
-Kate

Great!

i oly have to say one thing... were's chapter 10

this story is very very intresting
the 3rd time ive read les story on fanfiction
pretty good
luv it though

U-Hu-HU-HU-HUPDATE!

Woow, wow... I can't believe I missed out on the update in November! Geeze! Wow, this chapter was spicy and hot! Very nicely played, and I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

I just finished reading (for the tenth time) this story and "THe Perpetual Cycle" and i am just simply "aroused" (for lack of better terms) by them. WHy?? well thats my dirty lil secret lol Anyways update soon












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great story very erotic. can't wait to read more stories like it. love to hear more about what you have coming up. please keep me updated via email or IM

I learned two things today. First, I'm enjoying these types of stories more than I should. And second, the word 'vagina' is never, ever, EVER erotic. Ever.

Thanks for showing me how to write homosexual stories

Nice. I enjoyed how you played out the Bonnie/Monique thing even though I've never thought about it that much.

Momo is sick so, I, Mr.Frstr(lawyer) is speaking for the sick teen(and just in case it's not obvious I took the vowels out of my last name).

I printed this chapter out and Momo read it in bed while eating her tomato soup(that she made for herself against her mother's wishes) and she wrote this a piece of paper:
"WHY DID YOU STOP IT THERE!? AGH!! Ich hasse Sie!! Everything was... going *auf* and you just stop it. No really, I can't wait for more. Write some soon so when I get better I something to review too!!"

I agree with Momo that this chapter was interesting. We both can't wait for more to read and review to.

Update soon!
-Mr. Frstr.(Lawyer)

YES! Thankie you!

nice chapter, so far! x

momo: WHERES MY LEMON!? Ihr solch ein necken!!

lawyer: Yes, it's rated M and yet... no real lemon yet. It's already the 7th chapter too.

momo: GIMME SOME REAL LEMON OR ELSE!!