This is really good so far. The plot intrigues me, and I want to see how it will develop. You write quite well, and I am unable to spot any grammatical or spelling mistakes. Do you use a beta?

Looking forward to the next chapter.

~Kaze

I don't know why, but this story intrigued me. I am an avid Roy/Riza fan and I'm not much on Yuri. But I decided to give this story a look.

It seems pretty good so far. It looks to be well thought out and I don't find any mistakes like you often see in fics. Everything makes sense and I don't see anything outragous or silly (I haven't had much luck lately with a lot of fics). The fact that the writing is mature is what really pulls me in. Not sure how I am going to like it as it goes on (like I said, Yuri isn't my thing) but I plan to keep reading.

Good job, keep it up. :)

i like this story alot. good job

Sweet, Riza and Ross! Hope to see more soon.

It can't hate you that much if you were able to update that fast. This story's growing on me. I haven't really gotten into this pairing, but you may made a fan out of me yet. Heh. I hadn't seen it spelt Ishval, but if you say so. Hurrah, plot development. Update soon-ish.

Just a question. Do you mean do spell Ishval, or do you mean Ishbal? That's all for potential errors, this is an incredibly well written fanfic.

Not bad. Love the details. Great job so far. Can't wait for more!

I am not a great yuri fan myself, or, at least, I didn't use to be one. These days I'm getting more and more into yuri. My fave yuri pairing is WinryxSchiezka, of course, but I do love a good Riza/Maria as well. This is very well-written, and I can't wait for the next chapters. This is not one of my faves at the moment, but after a few more chapters, this'll probably be one. Please keep up the good job and update soon!

~Kaze

This is good so far. I like the idea. Hope you continue!