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| Egyptian Princess of 1290 b... 2006-03-06 ch 38,  | abuseloved it, beautiful ending, so cute, you've got talent. oh by the way Rachel Weisz won the oscars, yay! well i hope you will continue with your other stories you truly are a talented writter. |
| devastee 2006-02-17 ch 37, | abuseAw..it's really good to hear Angela is overcoming the depression thing. Pleasex10 continue!! I would really like to hear more about the mother/daughter relationship..aw..sweet x] |
| Egyptian Princess of 1290 b... 2006-02-16 ch 37, | abuseaww.. i lvoe it this is the sweetest chapter yet, i knew angela could resist her little girl. please don't delete it this is a good story, you rock, keep up the good work. |
| DesertFlowerSimion 2006-02-16 ch 37, | abuseawe! That was so sweet! I think this is a good chapter! not bad at all. |
| devastee 2006-02-06 ch 36, | abuseaww..that was really cute. J/A's future, hope everything goes well. it's nice to see a family-guy John. hehe. x3 loove it. (i was surprised that you've updated btw) |
| DesertFlowerSimion 2006-02-05 ch 36, | abusehehe... John's getting a little um... frustrated. ;D I liked this. Your writing's getting better gal! Woot for improvement! But are you sure "contempt" is the right word to use for this sentence: ''Yes i did, now eat to your hearts contempt'' I think the word you're looking for is "content" not "contempt". contempt means passionate hatred whereas content means satsfaction. Just thought I'd point that out. Keep it up! I'd love to see where this goes. ~DFs |
| Egyptian Princess of 1290 b... 2006-02-05 ch 36, | abuseaww...i love it, thanks for updating so soon. this is one of the best and most romantc chapters ever, please update soon you are great with this story. |
| Rhiannon Reeves 2006-02-05 ch 36, | abuseWell, I had the privilege of reading this chapter before you posted it, so you already know what I think, but I'll say it again: I ABSOLUTELY ADORE IT, I LOVE NAUGHTY JOHN! This is, in my opinion, one of your best chapters ;) |
| devastee 2006-01-28 ch 35, | abuseanother brilliant fic x] siigh. i just don't understand why you have too go on a break! all of your work is...wow! ;] |
| Egyptian Princess of 1290 b... 2006-01-27 ch 35, | abusegreat, fantastic. i loved it, but why did he give her the sleeping pills? i'm really confused there. well great you rock too! well my life secrets story should be up tonight or tomorrow we'll see how tonight goes. bye now, and keep up the good work, i love reading your stories. much love coming from egpytian princess |
| DesertFlowerSimion 2006-01-27 ch 35, | abuseAwe so cute! ~DFS |
| Rhiannon Reeves 2006-01-27 ch 35, | abuseAww, sweet... The fact that John was actually in a relationship with one of THEM is great!! Btw, the argument thing IS past us ;) |
| Egyptian Princess of 1290 b... 2006-01-26 ch 34, | abusefantastic, love having you back and writting, love this chapter, poor angela. better yet, poor john. please keep up the great writting, i look foward to reading from you soon. |
| Rhiannon Reeves 2006-01-26 ch 34, | abuseGood, as always ;) I love the fact that Chas actually baby sits Lily! That's so cute... |
| Egyptian Princess of 1290 b... 2006-01-20 ch 33, | abusegreat, fantasic, i love it this is great. just a quick question why does she call him 'constantine' if that is now here last name too. oh, no wait she has Amnesia doesn't she? well that's just great. ok no really even though that is a really good idea, keep up the good work i'm dying to see what is going on through that creative mind of yours. p.s.-i'll e-mail the review to the story you sent me when i can, i've just been grounded for doing something very bad and i'm not allowed to use the computer tomorrow, but maybe i can get out of it.:) i'll e-mail you later bye:) |