Good, but the plot moved a bit past.
It was little weird how she randomly went to him when he was in so much pain and all, and also how he bought an engagement ring when he didn't even have a relationship with her.
But good nonetheless.

:)

Love it so much.
Thank you.

Pretty sweet. I like this story.

Maybe this is what we dont see in episode II. Nether the less a great story!

WTF?!! SICKEST THING IVE EVER HAD THE DISPLEASRE OF READING!

NICE

that was a well written one shot thanks very good ♥

Aw this one was not just sexy, but sweet as well.

Surely you're going to write more of these delicious one shots. :D

I think I like the Anidala smut better than the Obidala. *grins* It's all your fault. ;)

i love it you are a anakin/padmae sexual genuse
10/10

OMG I LOVE THIS! i think u should continue it rox!

ok u have to post right now or im going to go crazy. this is so great.

This is amazing. I love it!

I love this story it's very hot and very sweet. You're a great writer. Have you thought about continuing with this one? I think it could be interesting to see where it goes from here.

keep going.