I found myself unable to breath after this...too hot! Wonderful!

:)

Revenge... of the Jedi!

Ahh, that was, I must say, rather... hot. :)

Great short story. Enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work.

another extremly god story

Excellent story, their interplay and longing for each other was skillfully done but you might want to emphasize more that she is screaming, i didnt get that impression.

Amazing Story! I notice you have lots of stories lol, keep writing more ^_^ You truly are a talented writer, keep up the good work, always reading,

Brittany

Very delicious.

please do not let this be a one shot! it has to continue i love it how she orders him around even though he tries to protest x

This was great i loved it