Screw what the reviewers say. You write for you, not for anyone else. If they don't like where your fic is going they can piss off and read something else. You can never write as good when it's forced instead of what you really want. And trust me, when people start complaining, you're doing fine. It means that you've gotten them to care about the fic or else they wouldn't bother complaining, they'd just go elsewhere. If they feel strongly enough about it to complain, you must be doing something right. (Well, the exception would be if you were doing extremely bad, but that's not the case here.)

Crazy! lol.

So what did it say?

Yay! But he didnt tell her when she would hear, so she's still depressed.

She had to say it...lol.

Interesting...lol.

HAHAHAHA! Poor Gohan! Those dorks!! lol.

Pee and gravy? lol.

CPR is hard though...lol.

Whoa! What happened? lol. (^_^)

Nice set of chapter, lol!! Love it!! Update soon! Thanks.

NO!! Why did you ...arg! It was getting so good! Why! Please update! Mr horny...lol! Awesome chapter!

-Lady Raven ^__^

thanx 4 updating :)

Well your latest chapter seems to be getting better and better. I like where the storys goin and you seem to be keeping me wanting more. Have no idea who the riddle refers to though. Hope you could tell me as long as it doesnt ruin the story for me, thanks. Anyway, hope to here from you soon and keep it up. See ya!

I am very so terribly sorry for taking more than a month to review your story! School became crazy and ate my life and then my exams got over last week, but now...i can finally review!

What a chapter I came back to! Remember how I complimented you on your choice of words to describe situations, well, I feel this huge urge to state it again...YOUR DESCRIPTIONS ROCK! They are amazingly stunning! They describe everything so elegently and perfectly! All your words and the lines used to describe the situation and the settings are just so poetic, and yet they're used in such genius ways, like describing how the plants were hooked around Videl's legs! Your play on words is just amazing!
But of course among that, there's the fact that your story is coming along extremely nicely! Your critical plot, the relationship between Videl and Gohan, was always being progressed perfectly and gradually, and it was always really realistic! And now it has finally cumulated! The courting seems to have come to a conclusion as Gohan and Videl have their moment of romance on the floor of that cavern. And, it was done extremely well, how you brought them together, so great work on that!
What's also cool was how Videl and found out about the strange letters on the chest and how the both of them deciphered the coding on the wall, only to be faced with a really cool riddle! If that riddle was your own creation, then that's really awesome! I mean, it rhymes and it sounds like it has an extremely significant meaning behind it!

I guess the only problem I encountered with this chapter was how you switched between present and past tense a few times throughout the chapter. It's not a big deal, but I just wanted to mention that.

But in any case, this was such an Amazing Chapter! So, Amazing Chapter!