Wow i like your style of writing

keep it up

wow, your fic rocks, i am still in shock, your writting is the style i like, cant wait till part three

More!

Again, fabulously done. I loved the pair of them together before, but now I'm absolutely in love. You're amazing.

hmhm, It has been a good while since I took a look in the pkm section, but for some reason this fic popped into my head the other day so I figured I'd try to find it and give it a reread.

nice as I remember, good work. has a genuine noir flare to it that I appreciate

Whoa...that was so sweet...great dialogue at the end. I wish I could write like you! ;_;

Since I reviewed the first part, and loved this part as much, I thought it only fair to review this one, too, and boost your ego that little more. Because you *are* a great writer. And this is a great story. *round of applause*

Sorry, 'bout the opther review but...YEAH! That was very good! Your're a very good writer!

A good ending to a good story... Waaahhhh! I didn't want to stop reading!

I liked this, but it needs to be chaptered. I'll re-review it for you when you do.