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| -_~ 2008-05-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseAi! It's a shame that you haven't continued it! This was so funny and romantic, and I absolutely loved it! Especially the ending part of this chapter; those kinds of scenes can be difficult to pull off, particularly the humor aspect, but it went off quite fluidly and very nicely! I'm not sure if you're thinking about continuing this story, as it's been about 2 years since your last post, but I absolutely enjoyed it and will defintely read the next part if you decide to post! -_~ |
| sarahtheweirdo 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseAwsome chapter! Loved the kissing scene and how Yusuke acted. It was very much like him. Lol, have a nice day! :D |
| justine 2007-12-11 ch 2, anon. | abusereally good story again and about the sketch me sorry about that i just god kinda confused about yusuke,hiei and kurama could you pls continue the story thanks a million |
| Elizabeth 2007-08-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseHaha great! No not just great, brilliant! No no..um..I can't think of anything that can describe the awesomeness xD I love your fics--they're amazing. This one, so far, is hilarious and I'm sure will be just as funny by next update ^__^ Oh my favorite part was when Kuwa fell from the tree and they continued talking with him yelling :D Hehe so well into character, imo. Yusuke's such a pervert! Can't wait for an update (honestly, I can) Lovin' YusXKura. I enjoy your fics so much! Please keep up the great work! ~Liz |
| Sora Sotara 2007-07-27 ch 2, | abuse(*Laughs*) Loved it! Great fun and random enough to be unpredictable if you're really enjoying it. |
| Sora Blade707 2007-06-10 ch 2, | abuseKurama, you're so heartless to poor, depraved, attention-seeking Yusuke. XD Kurama: Well...I DID bake the brownies for everyone. I WILL NOT eat them by myself. There's Ku- Kurama: NO. ...uh...Hi- Kurama: Ugh, just FRIENDS. Oh...so you made them for Yusuke? Kurama: ...I fell for your trap, didn't I? Why, Kurama! What EVER gave you that idea? -false innocence- Kurama: -snorts- Hope you update soon...before I kill Sora. -glares at Sora- O_O Meep! |
| Ryuuie Mizishi 2006-11-03 ch 2, | abusexD Sorry that I forgot to review sooner, I've been overly busy with an odd mixture of utter crap. bt hey! You did update, and I liked it a lot! Haha... please update soon, et cetera... fun. |
| Ryuuie Mizishi 2006-10-13 ch 2, | abuseHaha! that was quite funny, adn I really enjoyed it, though you might want to check for a few misplaced parenthesis. I saw a efw while reading, but that's it. :3 thanks for updating, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. |
| tinkletimekelly 2006-10-13 ch 2, | abuseOkay. More please. |
| Nyte Kit 2006-10-01 ch 2, | abuseWell okay then. That was a rather interesting chapter. Kind of expected Yusuke to do the asking, but didn't expect Kurama to do the refusing. It was still funny as hell, though! And I just loved when Yusuke trapped Kurama against the sink to kiss him! Can we say hot? Yes, we can. Update soon! |
| Ylang-Ylang 2006-10-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseUnlike your other stories, this has neither action nor any particular drama. It's simple...rather musing in the way your write it. What makes this story stand out from all the rest is the sheer comedic genius in the way you structure the dialogue (and the fact that you're not thrusting yourself, thinly disguised as an original character into the story, but I digress). Kuwabara's dialogue, both inner and outer, are hilarious and perfectly in character; both Yusuke and Kurama dialogues ring with accurancy and character. Brilliant and excellently done! |
| darknesspirals 2006-09-30 ch 2, | abuseOhh... So mean. Poor Yusuke. I hope Kurama feels bad. Anyway. This style is drasticly different from the one you used for a lot of your other stories. It stays on the surface of the story more rather than getting deeper and dipping into their thoughts. It's fluffy. But very amusing. So long to leave it unupdated though! I hope you don't leave us as long this time before re-igniting our curiosity. Good writing! |
| BlueUtopiah 2006-09-24 ch 2, | abuseThis story is very amusing. YAY for persistent and charmingly cocky Yusuke. I agree with Kuwabara, the Detective would probably end up being a porn star if allow to persue an entertainment career...although he was pretty good as a newscaster (insert snickering here). I laughed out loud when Kuwabara fell out of the tree, and Kurama is wonderful in this - his characterization is spot on. |
| Red Kitsune Flames 2006-09-23 ch 2, | abusePoor Yusuke, he's been rejected. |
| Haykatsi 2006-09-23 ch 2, | abuseUPDATE SOON! |