wow
that was...disturbing...
I really liked he character of Martel but I didn't imagien her like that
well anyway that was really well-written and really angsty
really I don't really know how to talk about it but still good job
it really was a fic worth reading!

*takes in deep breath*

That was awesome. Amazing creativity, I envy you. >D This makes me muse. I want to write more . . . but there's no ideas coming through at the moment. Maybe I should sniff some mothballs and watch Hagaren again.

Anyways, gorgeous story, it felt very dream-like, the way it was written. I love.

Eck, depressing. Really depressing. Interesting take on it, though.

I love the title! It's like Kill Bill, FMA style.

Nice! I loved the mixing of the blood to creat two sould in one armor. Well thought of.!