smile. nice story.

Very well done. What a thought-provoking story. All the points in it were well made, and I'm impressed by the thought behind it. It seems totally plausible, given everything in the B5 universe, and an important & graphic representation of the effects of the late war. You did a great job with handling this & working in the romantic scenes in a way that totally jivved with the plot & mood. While it was a sad story, I enjoyed it immensely-particularly with that happy ending that felt so well-deserved!

The first part nearly made me sick... But the whole thing was well done.

That was fun and sad and romantic and nice. Thank you.

WTF? you caan't end it there! okay, well, you can, but i don't think you should! More? A sequel? or something? AnYtHiNg! pleaz _

HIKARi

Fantastic story, well written... Sequel?*grins*

A truly beautiful story; moving, and dealing realistically with pain without being so {deleted} angsty that I feel like slitting my wrists with a butter knife. {g}

I won't urge you to continue with a sex scene (although I want to {g}); but if you ever get the urge for a sequel, please do.

Thank you for a well-written, very very good read. :D

Oh, very well done. A few thoughts: The line, '"Maybe," he said softly. "Is that such a bad thing?"' is the best in the whole piece, I think. A wonderful moment, and very beliveable, when Marcus cuts short their interlude in the Engine Room. A small point - I don't think that you really need all of the capitalized words in your dialogue. I think that you've done a good job already in conveying the emphasis from the context. And a small grievence: "It's Commander, Major James Hartwell, was reassigned to a High Security Military Prison on Mars" - It's it is. Its possessive, belonging to it. Your sentence should read "Its Commander, Major ..." Sorry, it's a reflex after grading papers. Very well done, and I hope that you continue to explore these characters.

Awwwww! This was good!

Pretty good stuff, definitely near the top on my list of M/I fic!

So excellent. Fabulous angst, and a worthy plot. Realistic too. I'm adding you to my favorites!

Some fabulous lines mixed in with a sober plot, my ever favorite duo and a satisfying ending makes for an excellent start to my Sunday morning. Thanks for posting. I'm eagerly awaiting your next story.

More please. I enjoy your work:)

Whoooo I love it when I find a new M/I story in here! Love ALL your stories (read them often lol) OldHistory & SharonG's too! More, More! This was great, very romantic and nice groping look forward to more of your stories.