|Reviews for Behind the Lines|
| Dwayna Black 1/22/12 . chapter 5
Belive me, but I have no idea who is this Death Eater :D
| Windchimes of Maple 5/16/11 . chapter 8
The last line made me want to cry...This story is beautiful...I loved it..
I hated it when there were just names mentioned and nothing more..and the way JK said that fifty or so people died but nobody knew every name...Sad..Sad...Sad...
| Windspiel 3/17/11 . chapter 4
Wow, that's amazing. I have to admit that I feel bad for Dudley...but that doesn't excuse his actions. You did a great job, I've never read before about Dudley's feelings. Very credible and quite touching...thanks.
| LyricGirl16 11/20/10 . chapter 7
I decided to review under this one because it was my favorite. :) Granted, it's also the most ambugiuous and is driving me up a wall that I don't know who it is, but...
I really enjoyed the introspective way that your wrote these. You were really able to get inside the character's heads and they each had their own personality. For example, Eloise really gave off a kind of shy, wistful vibe.
I also enjoyed how you explored the 'why's in the character's actions over the course of the books.
Overall, fantastic job! :)
| OhtarIstar666 9/19/10 . chapter 6
My favorite line is when she says that Aragon would pass potions. He would... This is my favorite chapter also, but it is all very good.
| HeyI'mTalkingToYou 8/29/10 . chapter 7
gideon/fabian? good job!
| HeyI'mTalkingToYou 8/29/10 . chapter 5
Is this Barty Crouch Jr.? Well, whoever it is, it's really good!
| HeyI'mTalkingToYou 8/29/10 . chapter 4
| HeyI'mTalkingToYou 8/29/10 . chapter 3
interesting. I love how you've made not-that-sympathetic characters at least understandable. I love hearing about their motivations-you've really captured them well.
| HeyI'mTalkingToYou 8/29/10 . chapter 1
I feel like we've all had crushes like these. Maybe Romilda was a bit more...adamant about hers than most, but you've painted a very sympathetic picture of her here. Good job.
| Amy Christina 7/23/10 . chapter 8
Ignore my last comment on chapter five, because you told us who it was (x
This was great - seriously. "I'll stain the ground gryffindor red" was just brilliant. Though I'm not sure who that particular chapter was about. I think I just love the way you write. Great job.
| Amy Christina 7/23/10 . chapter 5
so for some reason, beyond me, i thought this was Rodolphus Lestrange..? But I'm most likely wrong - I'm really bad about guessing at these sort of things. (:
| DerangedxandxSarcastic 10/17/09 . chapter 8
Brilliant, you did manage to get into his head I'd say, I love the last line. Great job!
| DerangedxandxSarcastic 10/17/09 . chapter 7
Oh, Evan Rosier, nice. I kind of thought Barty jr. was too obsessed to be the one.
Anyways, one of the Prewett boys, Molly's brother, I love that he was a legend, him and his brother, great job.
| DerangedxandxSarcastic 10/17/09 . chapter 6
Oh poor Eloise, I hope that life turned out well for her, that's so sad.