For fooling me into thinking that you were continuing this story! DENNISUD PREPARE TO DIE!
Actually, just kidding. That's harsh, being abandoned by one's muse.

Awesome Taro, formally Pantyhose Taro walked out with Shampoo... his wife.

Why is it that so many people spell the word "formally" when it is supposed to be "formerly" as in past tense. It drives me nuts.
Sorry about the rant on an otherwise great story.

Wow, and just when it started getting good too... I'm a bit disappointed really, but I know what lost muse is like, its not fun... I'm trying to keep writing/rewriting one of my stories, but I seem to have written something a bit screwy somewhere. Anyway, I wish you all the best, and drop me a line perhaps.. maybe you could give me ideas on my story...

both of ryouga's parents get lost big time there are a few theories about that but no true explanation one theory is they are distant cousins another is that if you marry a hibiki you become lost like a hibiki

um... where's the next chapter man... just wondering... its really good... keep up the good work man...

Ryu_Vision

This is a great story so far. I can't wait for more. Way to Go!

Great story, and looking forward to the next update.

Pretty good so far, with only one major problem (my own, however)... if Ranma and Akane loved each other that much, why the heck was she trying to make Ranma jealous? Shampoo was already out of the running, Ranma likely still only considered Ukyo a friend, and _supposedly_ Kodachi was receiving psychiatric help.

Kissing each other and declaring their love for each other AFTER Akane and Ryoga were married? This is only adding insult and further dishonor to injury and an already very bad situation.

Recommendation: (for what it's worth) start over, while keeping the relationship between Ranma and Akane uncertain (you've got them too certain of their feelings here, presumably just to create angst). You can have Shampoo end up with Taro WITHOUT having him as having defeated her in combat and becoming her new airen (which really doesn't hold any water, as Taro would have to defeat RANMA, _THEN_ Shampoo, to gain her as his wife).

(lol) That's a great ending to the chapter.

i'm very confused... can someone answer me? is this ranmaXakane? or ranmaXkasumi? or ranmaXnabiki? nice chapter by the way... :P

Excellent. Can't wait to read more.

Again nicely done. Good portrayal of the various reactions. I especially liked the Mouse/Ukyo scenes and the dojo scene.

Oh yeah that ** shall PAYY!
Kodachi is about to meet Death,Destruction,and Mayhem alternately entitled Ranma,The Tendos,and The Amazons.

Fun times ahead! ;-)

Derek The Rogue

A very long chapter, lots of stuff happening here. You had some close calls and some really depressing stuff happen here... the aftershocks of Kodachi's attack. Hopefully she'll get hers in the next chapter... when everyone else comes a knockin'...

As I have never seen Ranma and read only one Ranma manga (which was not to my liking), I had no clue who anyone was or what was going on. So, the following is a result of such: I was bored reading it. Aside from the mispellings (I'm used to it with you. :-p), it was an okay story. Hey, I'm just trying to be honest with you, man.

Personally, I don't like reading stories containing sex scenes and language (which means I don't read fanfics much, heh) unless the story is insanely deep and complex so that those scenes are nothing compared to the rest of it.

But I'm sure someone who understands Ranma likes it so don't let me stop you. ^_^