Well written, and the ending is fitting

ah, that sweet :) defs a fave.

favourite part would definitely be ken-chan as king thug, because it's so true XD

-cherri

It's amazing to see you run the gamut from the tragic to the hilarious to the heart-warming all in a single, not-that-long sprint. The terror and desolation of their Earth assignments is almost palpable, as is their silly machismo and brotherly alliance when they stand around gawking at how stupid they look in the magazine. It takes a lot of talent and work to hit on any of those emotions in a satisfying way, much less hit the mark on all of them back-to-back.

Well done

LOVED THIS! My favorite four thugs ^^
Great job!

-Sayuri

19.- Screw being saved when he was a kid. This is the real reason before his tattoo XD
15.- Long live Zaraki, king of the thugs!
10.- That was one of my favorite fights of the arc. How they were fighting just for the sake of fighting, world peace be damned XD
9.- What a way to cheer up a friend =D
8.- *giggles* I wish I could've been there to see that.
7.- So, if you want to praise me, you have to introduce me to your sister ô.o?
6.- Now that's what I call a practical joke. It's kind of sad for them, though.
4.- Then we'd better not let him find out. It'd be such a waste... he's one of the hottest guys.
3.- Aw...
2.- Aww with starry eyes...
1.- *smile*

Overall review: You're a freakin' genius. Congratulations.

This is fabulous. Funny and sad at the same time.

What badasses. This was enjoyable to read, keep it up! =]

number 9= the best.

Whoa, great story! Love all of these guys and their friendship is wonderful! Kudos!

Its beautifully written, touching and silly at the same time. I was snorting with laughter at the 'Backstreet Boys' part... XD

it got me all sentimental and cracked me up at the same time.. lol XD

XD This is total awesome and win.

LOL OMG, that was awsome! xD
Zaraki is definitely "King Thug" ne
and I just loved how you kept them all in character! Great job! ^^

this is so awesome! well written and it still keeps the characters original personalities!

Awesome piece of writing - I loved the camderie and the friendship between the four, and the swearing and doing what "boys do" made me laugh. And of course, Hisagi is just love. Thank you for sharing.