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| Alphawolf69 2008-02-02 ch 1,  | abuseIt's always refreshing when I read a story that is so unexpected, yet written in such a plausible manner that I can't reject it. I was also really was impressed by the level of care and attention you paid to detail and the events were (scarily) easy to picture. Muldoon's reactions made me laugh -seriously, what /would/ anyone do if a raptor started licking their chest in a way other than as a prelude to a meal? The closing line was genius btw *grins* 'It was a good day for the female.' I was thinking 'Yeah, not so much for Muldoon...poor sod.' Great job. |
| DragonFireOKN 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, very good! |
| Metal Overlord92 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseHere's a suggestion. Make a bunch of one-shots of muldoon trying to escape from the island but dinosaurs continues to screw him over. Just a suggestion. |
| Dragonborn 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseWell that was sick, weird, and a little disturbing. Therefore, I have no choice but to add it to my favorite stories. |
| Xeno the Hedgehog 2006-10-16 ch 1, | abuseAgainst my better judgement, does the alpha raptor...you fill in the blank? |
| VG Jekyll 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseAww, Alpha raptor is just like a big kitten! |
| Bill Everyman 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abusePlease Write more quickly |
| hiei 2006-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh i think she likes him i love it it is realy good so far please update |
| Calime07 2006-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. This is really good so far. It's different too. I like that. Please update soon! I want to know what happens next! |
| tinks_belle85 2006-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseFirst of all, thank goodness for another Robert Muldoon fan! I'm extremely happy to see another fic about him show up! It's very well written and I'm loving where this is going. I hope you continue and don't leave us waiting too long for the next installment! Again, great to see another fan and keep it up. Take care! TINKSY :) |
| The Lady Elrond 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseYes! Another Muldoon fanfic! Keep 'em comin'! |
| samus18 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseHmm, I'm not quite sure I fully understand this fic, but it's awfully darn interesting. You should write more of this; I'd definitely read it. |
| Tallacus 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abusethis has potential, if you continue please add some dialogue between the raptors, perhaps the alpha raptor sees muldoon like a father figure or something, i must find out more, update as soon as you can, GOD bless |
| Meethrill 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseAlright, its cool, its clever, it's too short. Lol. what happens? please update! |
| Mark 2005-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseMe again dude. Say what will happen next? I was thinking he becomes part of the pack, you know like Jane Goodall or something. |