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bored2pieces2
2008-07-20
ch 14,
abuseOh my god. You updated? I LOVE YOU! (But not in a creepy way, you know? I don't even know you like that. JK, kinda. :D) But more importantly I love this story. I cannot thank you enough for not giving up on it! I hope I can expect more chapters! And if it's not too much trouble, just a little (or lot, I'm not picky!) more Jacqueline/D'Artagnon romanticalness.
The Daring Hat Trick
2007-12-04
ch 13,
abuseAnother magnificent cliff hanger...you're really building up the narrative momentum now and I am itching to see how it all ends. Badger's character must be quite amusing to write :)
Jacqueline Roget
2007-11-12
ch 13,
abuseoh dear! That looks BAD!
bkwrm
2007-11-12
ch 13,
abuseWell it's about time! Great chapter,though. I hope I don't have to wait long for the next one. Hey, when are we getting to the romance?
Lady Ricard
2007-08-19
ch 12,
abuseI'm not likeing what Mazarin is up to... course I'm not sure what he is up to... but I do know it is up to no good can't wait to read what happens next come back soon Turtle2
The Daring Hat Trick
2007-07-26
ch 12,
abuseGah! It's been seven months since you've updated... TBC? Honest? I'm beginning to doubt that!
It's been a pleasant read thus far, Turtle, but I would much prefer if you completed it :) Please continue!
bored2pieces2
2007-06-17
ch 12,
abuseWow! This is a GREAT story! It's imaginative and witty! I can't get enough. Please update soon 'cause I can't wait for more! I love it!
Jacqueline Roget
2007-05-21
ch 12,
abusevery well written.
dddynamite
2007-01-11
ch 12,
abuseREally good I love it!
marei
2006-09-14
ch 11,
abuseGreat story! =) Are you going to continue? Because it's been a few months since you're last update... Please continue and update soon =)
Anon
2006-08-04
ch 11, anon.
abuseGreat to read this story again. Great characterization. I know javascript or whatnot is hard, but maybe try to create a more definite break when switching between characters/scenes. Great cliffhanger
kiss-of-cuteness
2006-07-26
ch 11,
abuseI can't believe Madge died *cries*. Jacqueline's reaction was perfect, she's always been extremely family oriented so it's lovely to see it come out in the writing. Keep updating!
dddynamite
2006-07-22
ch 10,
abuseWowowow soo good loven it soo much!
agenttanya
2006-07-03
ch 10, anon.
abuselove the story! I do hope you continue it!!
kiss-of-cuteness
2006-06-21
ch 10,
abuseAll is explained. Woo-hoo! I like all the secret societies. Keep writing!
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