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| Princess Pinky 2007-01-15 ch 45, | abuseThese FFN adds are really ticking me off. But that's besides the point. Firstly, I owe you a HUGE apology!! This review came way too late, and I know that. *procrastinating jerk* I love the title. "The Drake House." I never saw that movie, it didn't look that interesting to me. But I think it's so awesome how you tied in Drake's magical letter with this chapter. Now I do love Prake, but each time I read it, I get a little twange of sadness as I wonder what Glenn must be feeling as he watches from above. Or Glenda, and how she will react to her mom's pregnancy. And worst of all, it kills me that Drake is actually going to be taken away from Paige. It's not fair that she has to lose both of the men she ever loved! (I do hope we'll get to see both Andy and Drake again.) Oh! That scene at Social Services was simply heartbreaking. I can see it so vividly. Drake with a pale, sweat drenched face, trying to pretend like nothing's wrong as he hands Paige the flowers. And Paige, going along with his wishes only to have her face start to get red and her eyes glassy as she cries for Leo. :'( And it's so like Drake to suggest some exotic, world wonder while he's dying. You really yanked at my heart strings, here, Peanut. *sniffle* (Did I mention this scene was so good, perhaps my favorite out of the whole chapter, that I reread it like three times?) *fury* I HATE The Elders! They don't hav a right to go ruining people's lives like that! It's not fair. And I can't believe Thistle is in on it. That's just...wrong. I've never disliked Thistle before, but I can't say I won't think differently of her now. Slautering spirits in the afterlife? One, that doesn't make a lot of sense. Spirits are already dead. And two, how could they even get to the afterlife? I wish they would've thought of that before sending Prue off. And Phoebe's premonition. Wow. Heartbreaking. I love how Paige caught the smoke kiss in the force field, and how she was supporting Drake as they walked in. *sniffle* They are so wonderful as a couple. Much, MUCH better than Phoebe/Drake (otherwise known as the Phake Phoebe/Cole). And I loved how you utilized the Siren, although I personally hate her. lol It was in a much more tasteful way that the show. And the vanquishing spell was awesome! I envy all you guys and your great spells. The scene between Phoebe and Piper was so great. It really made me hungry, too. I could almost smell food. (And the chilled bottle of cider? Ooh. Sparkling Apple Cider is like...my favorite! Speaking of, I wonder if I still have a bottle hidden in my mom's closet? I have to check that out.) Oh, Peanut, my heart is breaking with that last pleading scene between Paige and Drake. Hey, I wouldn't talk to Thistle either. But I am glad that Prue finally got to read the letter. I just hope everything will work out for the better in the end. Renewed hope, huh? (BTW, I loved how both Paige and Prue get letters. It's a neat idea. They are so very much alike.) I loved that we got to see Prue, Piper, and Phoebe looking out at Paige from the window. It was so cute and sweet. (And we got a Twizzler mention!) Wow. Beautiful, amazing story, Peanut. Once again, I'm sorry this came so late. But it did come, as I promised. (Yes, I still believe I owe you more reviews for the sequel, so I'm off to view that now.) |
| alboppy 2006-12-03 ch 45, | abuseGreat series ! I just caught up with all the stories so I could understand the new part and think this is awesome!! |
| Sci Fi Fan Gillian 2006-11-10 ch 45, | abuseExcellent ending to a very well written story. I can't wait to read the next one in the series. |
| MusicaGrant 2006-11-04 ch 45, | abuseYou are totally awesome! I cannot wait for the next story! |
| Poofball 2006-10-25 ch 45, | abuseAwesome ending! I'm all anxious for the next story and I'm so glad that you're continuing the series! |
| Poisoned Princess 2006-10-25 ch 45, | abuseAww, poor Paige! That's the second time that happened to her. And now she has two kids with different fathers and both of their fathers have died. That's so sad. And I forget, what happened to Andy again? |
| bun 2006-10-25 ch 22, | abuseyay! phoebe's back! |
| bun 2006-10-24 ch 12, | abusecole as casanova? i love it! |
| moonfirefairy 2006-10-23 ch 45, anon. | abuseBrilliant chapter!Love Paige being pregnant but its a shame that Drake had to die.I got really into that pairing!Anyway,can't wait for the sequel! |
| Random3 2006-10-22 ch 45, | abuseAwe I can't believe it's over. Great chap thou, I loved the way Prue sulked in the afterlife and the way she spoke to Thistle, made me chuckle. Also the whole Paige/Drake thing was so sad...but sweet at the same time. I so wanna know what's going on with Piper that's been interesting to read the last view chaps. Also where's Mr. Trudeau? lol...eh, he can't be far where your concerned, lol. Anway I loved it and it was a perfect ending to an amazing fic. Can't wait for the sequel. :o) |
| PrueTrudeau 2006-10-21 ch 45, | abusemh.. i'm not quiet sure what to amke of this chappie. in my opinion it's too mcuh jumpin aroudn in times... and places. it kidna slightly confuzed me, but maybe you intended on doing it? like.. going down with a bang... i still wonder what happened to andy's body. i still wonder how piepr feels about everyone, but i'm very glad you continue on your story. hoep you strat goign soon! teh whole buisness with paige and drake.. it all wa skinda cute. very cute. drake still so... sober.. for someone who's dieing and also knwos he is. the whoel cupid thing... slightly gets to me... if paige's abby is gonna be a cupid, does taht mean drake's becomign oen too? i mean.. somewhere teh child's destiny ahs to coem form, now doesn't it? i kind ahope you make drake a cupid... i'd love to ahve you bring him back. like ia lready siad befor,e i always loved teh character and really wished he'd spend more time in the show. the letter form andy to prue was... it was a nice thing, he rememebered what really could help his wife out in this situation. i jsut kinda wished, you ahd maybe, like.. gave in a flashback of 1x22... where he like SAYS the same words... it's kidna thoughtful and very cool hwo you tied this up. that he 'told' her every time in theit time together he like had to leave the same words. when goign to colelge, when he died first tiem and now taht he's mummified as well. she really should have gotten the message by now!! tehe! now a little evidence of him beign there woudl eb nice.. amybe some sort of dream where he shwos her all the good tiems tehy had together? a tiny reminder of whatshe's fighting for? sticking at prue.. hehehe... thistle.. mwahaha... i really couldn't help myself from smirking when you always wrote 'the trusted fairy' and stuff liek that whens eh actually like... 'betrayed' prue. okay.. amybe it as for the bets.. but... it kinda hit some comedy nerve inside of me... |
2006-10-21 ch 44, anon. | abusei really felt for piper in the firts part. being constantly reminded of how some idiot used you and the people who actually shoudl eb there, shoudl protect and save you never came. i guess it's evry hard to dela with that fact alone, letting alone be constantly be reminded of it by some stupid amrk in yoru face. again i wonder hwo leo, melinda and piepr dela right nwo with eahc other. if maybe.. piper freaks about every little msitake her duaghter does. the relationship between leo and piper.. if it's always a constant tyring not to hit a bad topic thing. if piper really cna liek.. cuddle with ehr duaghter and stuff like that. in general i think you should deal with what piper's going through. explore her feelings some more. go a little about form her point of view. hwo she's feeling aroudn everyone. maybe she could discuss it with ehr clone ro sth? the scene between paige and drake amd eme laugh. somehow i always ahd lumiere, the candle of beauty and the beats in ym head whn i read it... i just couldn't hold myself back, though it's a real drake-thing to do. the picking the flower buds sth evry cheesy and at teh same time aw ;) i kind aloved the 'normalcy' of the penthosue part. both like.. settled down famiyl life and magic was like put under one hood. nicely done! the siren thing kinda confused me. and that not just a little. still not getting what the siren has to do with drake.. but.. i still hoep there at some point will eb soem clearing thoughts to it ;) |
| PrueTrudeau 2006-10-21 ch 43, | abusethe whole idea with the mark on piper is sth i enjyoed every much. soemhow i get tehf eeling taht teh amrk and the clone have sth to do with one another, but i'm sure you've got more going on there ocne mroe as i see. i really can't believe they vanquished jeric. what about getting andy out of his mumified state? but... at elats one thing jeric let drop... there IS a way to 'heal' piper the very last bit was what really realyl got to me. you ocne mroe almost had me crying there. i can really see how piper's there, starring into nothing, liek she's not really there, while the girls try to comfort her. but i guess piepr will ahve to elarn how to trust and love them again after tehy like.. let her down. as well i felt very sorry for prue. she always feels repsonsible for everything and everyone so.. this really must ahve struck ehr hard. i kinda wondered (also over the next chapters) how the kids deal with their changed aunt and/or mom |
| Write For The Soul 2006-10-21 ch 45, | abuseOh this wa soo good, can't wait for the new story |
| Jorden's Prayla 2006-10-21 ch 45, anon. | abuseI love the chapter and the ending. But I remember on charmed after life when Ally was born that you said that Paige and Glen were destin to be together. Has that all changed? |