PLEASE write more! I love it! I'm hooked!

Damnit Roy! You idiot!(chases Roy with a slege hammer)How dare you go off and die like!

p.s Great chapter!

Spottedstar106

HA roys back!

Oh no! nota cliff hanger! T_T plz upd8 soon!

OKay...it took me a long time for me to actually understand what this chapter meant...but in the end it's a pretty good chapter...especially since it's based in a true fact...really liked it ^^

update

Oh you can't stop writing the fic now!

OMG!! I want to know what happened - update!!

*threatens to click fingers and set everything alight if there's no update!*

~Ryopon~

*screams* hurry up and update please! don't give up on it now that was a very bad place to end it! you're soo mean! anywho, please update soon *puppyeyes*

Yay! They reunited! Can't wait for the next chap.

Wow, interesting. A switching of roles. I was so devastated when I saw Roy die in the previous. But this gave me hope. And now, I shall advance to the next chap.

interesting continue ^.^

Oh man, this is great!! It's really well written! New favorite thing.
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what the crap?! that's mustang? i thought you said he died.

Wow... pretty good! Could do with a little more "in-depth" explanations, or at the very least descriptions, that and the characters are a little... out of place... but that's ok - it's like you took the FMA story and then painted over it in some kind of gray - gave it a more somber, opaque kind of feel. Very good concept/idea. Now the big question is, what kind of love is it that Roy had in mind? Father/son, or shonen-ai? I honestly haven't read any of your descriptions, so I may just be the only one thinking this... Keep up the good work! Post soon! :)

wow. didn't expect that.
I wonder what's gonna happen next...
ROYED FOREVER! W00T~!