Alright then, I understand why you can not update. I suggest either updating at a library computer (if you can). If you think you can do better with your story, do what I do, write down your plot line. Write down key events that'll happen in your story in order this way you can remember wha is going to happen next. When you finally have everything down, fit it all into paragraphs and make a story out of it. Your computer is broken so I don't know how you'll be able to read this, but I hope my advice gets to you. ^^! See you when you update!

-Ja,casui

Great story! Aang went into the avatar state?

Anywho, don't worry what the person in the review below said. Your characters don't seem like Mary Sues to me, and they made out your story to be fifteen billion times worse that it actually is.

And to the person down there, NO NEED TO BE SO FREAKING RUDE! A simple, "Next time proofread your chapters a little better and try putting a little more 'oomph' into your characters" would have done the trick! And I'm sure she didn't ask for that huge, annoying speech on Mary Sues.

Anywho, if you want, I'll offer to be your beta if you want! Keep going :D

Cyaz
~FUNGUS

Okay dokay. I'm gonna take a not-so-wild guess at what happened B4 Katara blacked out.

Aang got free of his bindings and attacked the soldiers with a massive gust of air. Aang grabbed her and Sokka, jumped on Appa, and took off. Or they were thrown onto the ship. Which I highly doubt.

Just had to toss this story on my alerts. I forgot to do that, and when another story was updated, and the site let me know, I realized I hadn't added your story to my list. I decided to check it, and lo and behold, not a thing. Oh well.

Raaon Teisha (:)

Yea! I was praying they didn't cut his hands off... if they did *Comes back on a large dragon with a soward and bag of popcone in my hands* No more fire nation! K! Update as soon as posible!

I love the story. Zhao is such a jerk, his actions fit him only too well. When will Zuko come in? He's my fave character. Yes, oh well. I do fall for the bad guys most of the time. MOST of the time. Only most. Keep writing, its a totally awesome story so far!

I love your story now UPDATE!

>Sorry this review's late<

-Interesting...I hope that Keitara and Sokka will be able to see Aang and rescue him!
-The plot really seems to be seeking in, I just hope that Aang will survive >from his injuries< in time for him to be saved...just one question: How come Aang doesn't use air bending to get away? Even though he's gagged and tied up >and injured< he should be able to create sone air strong enough to break through whatever has him tied. Unless the injury's like mad strong and he can't move...or...*shrug* I dunno...XP

-HAPPY HOLIDAYS! >If you celebrate<

-Ja,casui

AWESOME! The pomes, the story... You are now going to fav authors!

btw: Read 'To Have and to Hold' it is in my fav list. I think you would really like it, if you like light AK.

yay! cliffie! continue please!

I like it!
How could Keitara not notice that?! ;_; Aang! Someone save him!
-I have to say, the plot sounds very intresting, but it needs to be introduced more than just the prophecy at the beginning.
-I like the story's idea so far, looking forward to the next chapter! (make the next one a little longer please, it'a a tad bit short).

-UPDATE SOON! KEEP WRITING!

-Ja,casui

lopved it, but cliffys are EVIL! but they are a good way to make readers review.

~Uma =^-^=