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I read the whole thing and loved it. One of the best stories I've read here.

It does seem pretty strange to hear Kolulu being bigoted and hurtful though.

I can't wait to see Zero X!

That was really good! I loved the whole story!!

Just one tiny mistake. I don't think you knew throughly but Shami and Tyler never really tell each other their love for each other. It's sort of the love that is To Be Continued...

O and Tyler and Lori have 2 kids later in their lives when their in their twenties.

But other than that I loved this epilouge a lot. I thought the part with Tiko and Kage looking at Arisha was HILARIOUS!

The ending where Zero was crowned king and said the thing about the night mamodos was good and I liked how Arisha ran up to Zero all dreamily. lol.

Great Story!

yay! good story, liked much, and update random battles soon, oh and one more thing, in my profile is a mamodo named rave, my cousins mamodo, he wants it in random battles, he doesn't have a computer!

That was an awesome ending!

*applaud*

Me: OMG! I'm in it! ^_^ YAYFULNESS!!

Kage: -_-'... ...I get soaked??

Grendelmon: The 'wet dog' look DOES kinda suit you...

Kage: SHUT UP!!

Grendelmon: Make me!

Me: >_< CUT IT OUT, YOU TWO!! GEEZ!! (To you) Anyways, great ending. Can't wait for a sequel... if there's one, that is.

Awesome chappy Rahkshi I'm so happy! *cheering*

Anyways, update when u can amigoe!

Me: OMG! This chapter is definitely coolness in story form! Good riddance, Goren!

Rating: 9.9/10

And about my previous review... there was actually a typo in it; turns out that Kage was looking at the drafts of the future chapters WITHOUT MY PERMISSION! *glares at him*

Kage: Not my fault you left them lying around.

Me: Grr... anyways, that was Zero X at the end, right? Can't wait to see him in action.

That was so cool! I liked it mucho!

lol! VACATION!! WOOT!

"Vacation's where I wanna be! Party on the streets, where the brudas are free! We don't need a holiday! Time to celebrate! Repeat after me, I need a vacation!"

lol, Pokemon the first movie. the pikachu thing. lol

Update soon!!

...wow damn this is kool -^o^-

Yay! Things seem to be heating up between Goren and Zero, update when you can!

OMG THAT WAS AWESOME! FIFTY THUMBS UP!

Chelsea: YOU DONT HAVE FIFTY THUMBS!!

ME: O yea...

Chelsea: *sigh* Awesome Rahk

Me: YA! It rocked. I CANT WAIT UNTIL ZERO RIPS THE SNAKES OUT OF GORENS HEAD. lol. And once again I'm sorry about that whole incident.

Update soon

Me: Great chapter as always. lol Kage got thunked on the head XD

Kage: Hey, where'd my wings go?

Me: Wings? What wings?

Kage: Ya know, my black angel wings. Didn't I tell you about them?

Me: No you didn't!

Kage: Oh. Must've slipped my mind.

Me: Arrghh... more &$#@!-ing adjustments to make... anyway, hope Arisha gets de-petrified soon, and keep going.

P.S.: I just got an idea for your 'Zero's Origin' fic.

me=...kool...--;

That was the perfect chapter for clearing some questions about Zero. It helped a whole lot!!

This is just an idea. But if you want for the next chapter something can happen where just Zero and Tiko battle "whoever you'd like" and it'd be something like the fight for everything and the other mamodo's are on the sidelines un able to help.

Just thoughts, but update soon!