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| ripitupgenki 2006-04-17 ch 9,  | abuseawesome work i can't wait to see the next chap. so intense! |
| LostInPrettyEyes 2006-02-05 ch 8, | abuseLOL way to describe the mystery dude at the end, "creased in the right spot" lol priceless. I like how its getting spicier, but you should really repost with corrections made lol sorry to keep bugging about that. YAY LULU! |
| LostInPrettyEyes 2006-02-03 ch 4, | abusejust some little problems here and there. PLEASE go back and repost whith the right grammar? There are way to many online lang words in here, and some of the punctuation is off. It doesn't pull away from the writing, which is great, but it's bothering some people including me. |
| LostInPrettyEyes 2006-02-03 ch 2, | abusehmm ok on second thought, I love where this is going. YAY LULU! She was always my favourite *wants to steal her away from Wakka* O I know this is gonna get good really soon..Really soon. |
| LostInPrettyEyes 2006-02-03 ch 1, | abuseWHOA! This was intense, I absolutely adore it. I'm going to read the rest, but you're totally added, this could even stand alone as a oneshot. Amazing amount of detail, I love the way the emotion was carried so powerfully. |
| Motet 2006-01-02 ch 4, | abuseoh, this is good. The Ending of this chapter was cute. Please continue really soon!! |
| xXRoseGoddessXx 2006-01-02 ch 4, | abuseNice story. Update soon. Check out my fics sometime. |
| Amarant Rose Coral 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseUpdate soon... I REALLY want to see him return :)... Hehe... update soon |
| Cloud Love 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseHey...that was a really good start...keep it up... |