PLZ UPDATE SOON!

Hms, it's Rukia, not Rukio, and I'm pretty sure it's Yoruichi/Yoroichi not Yoorochi. ^^ It's interesting, and you gave your OC an, uh, annoying aura haha. It's so similar to Ichigo's, man! ...Continue? Meh.

Wait...don't tell me this is ByakuyaxOC, because that's...uh, how should I say this...a bit on the off side haha. He's technically her uncle, although not by blood...yeahs. Strangeness haha. Anywhos, I'll stop rambling. Ganbatte

Great beginning- obviously referring to the first chap lol ^^. AhaHAHA! Ichigo! So like him, all protective and all. Oh well. Uh, will review again after I read the rest of your chaps. Just remember not too make her too good, neh? ^^

Laters

I luv this chapter so much and this fic it's so awesome!Please update when ever you can!
luv,
shadow-5-girl

Have been stalking your fic awhile... and now I shall reveal myself... XD
Okay, okay, on to my main point. Nice story, keep it up. Maybe you would like to double check a few of the characters' names (if you have a problem on that, I'll be happy to help :)). Pls update soon. Truly looking forward to reading your fic. Ganbatte!

Good chappy. Update soon please. ( i wanna see what happens o.o)

WA!
moremore!!
update!! ^^

Very interesting story! I hope you continue this!

Good story good good! i like ! keep up the good work and update soon couse i wanna read!

awsome!I luv this chapter!Please Update soon!
luv,
shadow-5-girl

Good story. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Please Update!Gr8 chapter!I luv it!
luv,
shadow-5-girl ^_^

Very, very, cool story. Keep up the good work.

i really like how your story is going... DO continue!

Your story sounds promising. Please update soon