i only now finished reading and.. i at the same time hope you will and woun't write chapters like thit. it was scary to read (sounds funny doesn't it). did i say your writing is so very good. i think i did. not always writings bring up emotions in me, but yours did. and on it's rare.
quit anything, but don't stop writing :D

you have brilliant writing skills. the characters seem so real, even more than in the original book. Rowling sould pay more attention to Malfoys. they're the characters wich can't not affect you. thanks for writing this :)

It is a shame that noone has thought of giving you a Review.
This Story is amazing and since I am a huge Lucius Fan, I am shocked and happy, both, of the inside view you give us here.

You made me cry on some parts, I always thought the same way about the Malfoys, 'cause I knew someone in RL, whose Family was punishing their childrens for Generations, no joke.

Perfect!

P.S.: I gave in a Story Draco with the same background his name, because of the constellation. ;)