Good story. Liked the ending.

I liked it a lot

Nice to see a different version of the episode

Cool stuff!

wonderful! love the ending!

Jade

I like it. A little prologue of why Sam took him to see the faith healer before the episode. Great story. It flows perfectly with the episode from what I've read(I haven't seen it yet). Could be a real part of it.

God you're killing me with the angst. Such amazing writing, I'm enjoying this story so much even if it is heart breaking.

Very cool. Catch ya on the flip side.

"he was the protector, and it was up to him to save the day, and by god he would do it with style"\

Man that line is classic. Love this so far! Keep it coming.

I like this alot.

this is really good...sad...but really good. cant wait for the next chapter!

This was a really great story. It made me cry a little bit. Keep up the good work.

-Daquiri

*sniff sniff*

A truly depressing prospect, but an excellent show of emotion.

I loved it!

Oh, now I wanna cry bittersweet tears.

omg! this is soo good! please write more i need to know if he diess...