 Jeanka 12/23/05 . chapter 1That was interesting. I like how Shiera is always so dominating. I'm not sure when Emma got the attitude though. And i feel bad for them due to their parents fear of anything Alien.
It's sad that you didn't show much of the space rangers, but sounds like the next chapter holds promise. (i know this is mostly a Carlos-centered fic, but can you throw in a special Andros part for me?)
Looking forward to the next chapter. |