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| O'NeillRoxMyWorld 2007-09-07 ch 2, | abuse"Got better." SO GOOD! SO FUNNY! |
| Caramelchan 2007-03-10 ch 2, | abuseomfg that was freaking awesome |
| Tate Swak 2006-02-25 ch 2, | abuseI love it! |
| Salem Navy 2006-01-16 ch 2, | abuseYeah... I got the "Got better" thing. That is what Fornell said after they had all thought he was dead. Great job! |
| Salem Navy 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuseI like it... a lot. Of course, unrealistic but who can argue with Tate? |
| chaste-aeon 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseJust some trifle thing: “What aboutus?”. A space is needed. There was this part, (Tony's) when I felt a pang of sadness for him. Field Agents? I want to watch the series. I mean, I love series such as these. Unfortunately, I don't have enough time to watch, even if I have dvd's of the season itself (which I don't have, this series, I mean.) So, even if I don't have any knowledge of the show and the characters except from the assumptions I made based from your story, I liked it. I liked it very much. Ooh. Fluff tlga. Oh yeah, I'll read the 2nd chapter some other time, alrightee? :) |
| Liz 2006-01-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh no! this can't be the end! I fianlly get Kate back in a wonderful story and that's it! Tell me there is a a sequel! I was great to read a well-written story where Kate was alive and happy and with Tony. Thanks for the awesome story, even if I don't get more:) |
| heartagram69 2006-01-10 ch 2, | abuseluved it |
| Stephanie519 2006-01-04 ch 2, | abuseAw! I love it! Thw hole thing is great, and I'm so happy you decided to add another chapter! Sorry I didn't review right away, I was 3 hours away from any computer... anyways, this chapter is great, and I like the end with Kate and Ziva. Steph |
| burningnostalgia 2006-01-04 ch 2, | abuse*poke* Fluffmonster. *laugh* But, hey, good fic. Can't say I got all the characters figured out, but at least I understand what's going on. Oh, and my drabble. *grin* Post it here when you're done. |
| iceicekatie 2006-01-02 ch 2, | abuseYup, got the reference to 2x05 :) Nice way to end it. Great fic! |
| .candleburn. 2005-12-31 ch 2, | abuseI'm so glad you wrote another chapter! And yeah, there are a few loopholes, but I love the story so I won't complain. :) |
| abbyroxs100 2005-12-31 ch 2, | abuseZiva and Kate friends. Not to be mean but WHAT!! I got to love it thought Kate is alive CA-CHING! I love Abby and here reaction was so funny, OMG! Anywho, UPDATE, pretty please with a cherry and a whole bunch of sprinkles on top. Jamie |
| Guevera 2005-12-30 ch 2, | abuseI kinda had a hard time reading this story, as it doesn't seem likely. I know I want Kate back more than anything, I miss her like hell, but... Well, Fornell came 'back from the dead' too, so I know it wouldn't be hard to fake Kate's death. But like you said, you didn't want to go over the details, ie the funeral, etc, but I can overlook all the details and just enjoy the story. It was very, very well written and you had all the characters just as they were meant to be, well done!! I do love this story, and I loved the exchange between Kate and Ziva - ooh, maybe you could have a scene where Kate finds out that Ziva is Ari's half-sister, how would she react?? Maybe this new partnership, alliance, whatever you call it, would al that change? I know at first Gibbs and Tony especially were cold towards Ziva, and the fact that she's related to that bastard was one of the reasons. It's not her fault, they know that, but still... And Kate is a kind and decent person, one that would be able to get past that little fact, even if it hurt her... Bec xxoo Oh, and more scenes with Kate and Tony - you write them PERFECTLY!! Lovin' it! |
| abbyroxs100 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseYou! Hi! Tell me this is not a oneshot, 'cause if it is I will start crying, 'cause so much can happen. So don't tell me it's a oneshot, if it is make it a twoshot, J/K. I LOVE IT! Jamie |