Aw! I liked this one, too! Makes ME want to definitely write a poem about them, but alas, it will be a challenge. How do can I, a measly mortal, put into words and express their love for each other? It's beyond words, but you have made great attempts at it! (I hope you take no offense in my comment.) Ever so sweet. Good job!

Love and farewell from the darkness,

SHAMARA AMBROSE

That was sweet.

this rocks. I read some of the manga and this is very aya and tooya... _

That is really sweet! Great job.