Short, sweet, simple, and darling, to say the least. It was cute. I have now become a hardcore fan of Aya and Toya (it's only one "o" in the series I saw). They have one of the greatest romances I have ever seen. AYASHI NO CERES (or CERES: CELESTIAL LEGEND as *I* know it) was so brilliant! It made me cry! My favorite anime yet!

I liked your repetition of the word "intertwined" and how you used it. It reminds me of a poem I wrote called "Naked and Intertwined." Very precious. (I wish they *had* shown the scene where they first made love. *sigh* How sweet that would have been. They're so perfect for each other.)

How'd you center your text like that? (lol) Well, keep on writing and hopefully I'll keep on reading! _

Love and farewell from the darkness,

SHAMARA AMBROSE

Hey, that was a good little poem (I hope that's what it was)Anyway, I'm a really big fan(okay it's my favorite show)and I love Toya and Aya. Their soo cute together.

I personally don't read much poetry but.. i kinda liked that one _;. it was nice.

Good poem! I like it!