Chapter 2!

This might be late for this but thnaks for chapter 2 and wow! I'd figure that Katsu had a mother that used to be a farmer or something...but your's made much more sense

It's called NAGGING, EK... :D People do it to me all the time to keep going with my one-shots, so I figured I'd pass along the favor.

Nice that Heihachi is the one who points out reality to Katsu, and yet not at all surprising that Katsu wouldn't remember him later. Typical. Sad, but typical.

KEEP GOING!

Michelle

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Samuraiko

That was nice. I still haven't seen the show, though, so it was a little hazy in some areas.

Paul

story is still a bit confusing but its gotten a bit clearer.

Very good, I'm glad you continued this! I still love your characterization of Heihachi :)

A nice little story, with a nice little conclusion. Go you! You have all my best wishes in your writing endeavours. I'm sure you'll do well. Tell us about it when you have a moment in your busy schedule ok?

much love as always.

zan

Very good, you've kept Heihachi and Katsu in character and created quite a believable subplot to S7. (You get bonus points for portraying Heihachi as more than just a rice-eater!) Hopefully you'll continue this, it has a very promising start.

-Reiya

I always thought that Katsu had this rich kid thing about him...glad to see I'm not the only one that thinks so!

thats such a great story or prologue or watever. Please continue soon. I would like to see how this story turns out. as of right now I'm not too sure. Will there be any pairings?

hello again

I loved this. Another nice backdrop for some of our favourite samurai. From the point of view of Hei-san as well. I love your S7 fics and am still waiting for the Kyuzo fic. One can hope, right? _. I hope to find time to read 'Firefly Story'.

Once again thank you for sharing.

- zan

There are a few troublesome spots with clarity, but the background story you laid out for Katsushirou was believable and persuasive. I hope you don't mind me drawing upon for inspiration should/when I decide to delve a bit deeper into Katsu's background and how he set out in his journey in my own story; that's a really big blank spot that really needs addressing.

ne, i like your theory. it's an interesting way to think about katsunoji, and why he ended up wandering around. it's clean and simple with the wording too, very nice. good job

HAH! I figured out the prince LONG before he was mentioned! Go me! XD

Predictions are always cool! Whee! I'm good at this! But I'm not saying your story's predictable ... I LOVE IT! XD

The scene has been set. Now we get to see how it plays out.

Merry Christmas!

Paul

Awesome, a great start! And so typical of Katsushiro to be blinded to the fact that the greatest strength AND downfall of the samurai is PRIDE. Keep writing!