Is it too much to hope for Alyssa to die a horrible death? God I hate that bitch

Killing Angel is not murder!

Jesus fricking christ, one expects other slayers to show some logical sense. Is Buffy a mass murderer for killing all those other vamps?

Why won't you continue this? This is awesome!

Nice story you have here. Any chance of seeing more of it?

I'm sick of this fiction.

You don't even remember what you write so I don't see why I should be bothered reading it. Jenny cursed Cordelia with a soul, not Willow. Fuck's sake; that's just one example of many.

Homicide in self-defense is called "Justifiable Homicide". It is NOT a conviction. Murder in the Second Degree is killing without premeditation or through negligence — NEITHER charge fits; especially after the "victim" had just committed Murder in the FIRST Degree, idiot.

I don't think I need to go into how out of character EVERYONE is, or how annoying your Mary Jew 'Lyssa is (the constant reminders "she looks just like Rachael Leigh Cook in 'She's All That' only with red hair" just underscore the point). The only character I could recognize here was Xander... and even that was a stretch.

The sick and perverted Harris family generations made me throw up in my mouth. Thanks for that. If you were going for comic relief you failed it pretty hard.

The plot you borrowed from everything EVER was extremely flat as well. You'd think with that much creative influence borrowed (or outright stolen) from other sources that you could make SOMETHING original, or at least not completely trite. You'd think wrong though. Way to keep setting that fan-fiction bar lower.

My excuse for making it this far through this travesty of fiction is due to fever-induced delirium, and being too lazy from said fever to browse elsewhere for my entertainment. It's also the same reason I'm putting no effort at all in to my critique, nor proofreading it before its submission. Regardless, I bet it'll still be better than the swill I'm reviewing. Even with a fever I at least remember wtf I write.

I think Andrew, instead of making Chloe fall in love with him should have instead made himself have all the qualities she was actually attracted to. That way, he didn't force her to be with him...she would have chosen him on her own.

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PLEASE UPDATED THIS!

Wow Updates, I thought this was dead, Thank you!

Nice.

interesting

Great chapter hope you update soon.

very cool, please continue

That was great. I was just going to skim the first chapter but your story caught my attention and held on to it. I'm lazy so that's why there aren't any reviews for the other chapters. I really do hope you finish your story because I love it from the way he handle the Angelus situation to this last chapter. It's different from anything I've read in a long time without it beening a crossover. Your story was definitely a breath of fresh air I needed. Thanks for the entertainment.

Amazing story I would have liked to see some of Faith as well as Xander/buffy but I still loved the story hope you update soon.

Quite the story.